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Sometimes 2026
Terry Kennedy-Lares

Sometimes I’d like to be someone, who has no morals,
and do anything I want, with no mental quarrels,
Look people in the eye, tell them every lie,
then I’d say goodbye and fly away, fly away.

Sometimes I’d like to live so free, like I was immortal,
buzzing round like a worker bee, rest on my laurels
give everything a try, never question why,
then I’d say goodbye and fly away, fly away.

Pre- Bridge
How do I become that special kind of guy,
who looks life right in the eye and doesn’t fly away

Bridge
Living in this world of trouble, doesn’t make much sense,
Living in a social bubble is just a cheap defense
No, I can’t let go, I can’t let go, of the things inside my head,
No, I can’t let go, I can’t let go, of the things that people said,
Where do you find the patience, Where do you find the peace,
Living life in abeyance, won’t help the pain to cease.

Sometimes I’d like to be someone, who you’d think was normal,
Pretending like I’m having fun, not acting formal,
Look people in the eye, never ever cry,
then I’d say goodbye and fly away, fly away.

Most times I have to be myself, and I’m not normal,
I’m just like anyone else, in this mortal coil,
I do what I can, to help my fellow man,
then I say goodbye and fly away, fly away.

I really don't know what i'm doing with this song. It's in early stages of production just enough to make it sound palitable.

I WAS THE CONTENDER,
UP ON THE LEADERBOARD.
ALWAYS RUNNING FASTER
CHASING MY REWARD.
"MAKE THE QUOTA," "GET THE BONUS,"
“WINNERS ALWAYS WIN”
PROFITING IN EMPTY COIN
WHILE HOLLOWED OUT WITHIN

BEFORE I RETURN,
BEFORE I GO BACK,
BEFORE I WAKE UP AGAIN
I'VE GOT TO SHARE WHAT I LEARNED
ON THE OTHER SIDE WHEN
I WAS REMINDED
OUR TIME WE JUST BORROW
AND DOLLARS WON'T REPAY THAT DEBT
ON THIS SIDE OF TOMORROW

ALWAYS LOCKED ON WHAT'S AHEAD
NEVER NOW, OR HERE.
A HORSE THAT PULLS UNTIL IT'S DEAD
AND NO-ONE SHEDS A TEAR
"WORK HARD, KEEP YOUR HEAD DOWN,
STAY IN YOUR LANE.
IGNORE THE DAISIES BREAKING THROUGH
THE PAVEMENT IN THE RAIN"

BEFORE I RETURN,
BEFORE I GO BACK,
BEFORE I WAKE UP AGAIN
I'LL KICK MY SHOES OFF,
DANCE ‘N SING, INHALE, AND THEN
REACH OUT TO MY NEIGHBOR
CAUGHT UP IN SORROW
OFFERING MY SERVICE HERE ON
THIS SIDE OF TOMORROW

TEENAGERS SING "I WANT" SONGS
ADVENTURE AND ROMANCE
I WANT A LIFE OF MY OWN INTENTION,
I WANT A BRAND NEW CHANCE
TAKE MY CHANCE …

TO SING LIKE THE NIGHTINGALE
SHARING MY MUSIC AFAR! OH,
I STILL HAVE MOUNTAINS OF WORK TO DO,
LOVE TO GIVE, LIFE TO LIVE,
ON THIS SIDE,
ON THIS SIDE OF TOMORROW

From the musical, Five Minutes on the Low Road, about a woman (Tanya) who has a near-death experience and returns transformed. This song is near the end, as she is reflecting on her journey. See www.5minlowroad.com.

You’re A Navy Man ©2026 Doug Millaway

You run sail like the wind
You float like a feather
You're a sight for sore eyes
Welcome home, brother

We've missed your smile
We really missed your story
I'd listen all day
Never have any worries

You're a navy man
Your life is so blue
When it comes to the ocean
It's a part of you

Time to head back to sea
To protect us all
It's where you have to be
You hear the blue winds call

You sail like the wind
You float like a feather
You're a sight for sore eyes
Welcome home, brother

Through the storms you've had to roam
We've been waiting standing near
The road sea may lead you far from home
But our love will keep you here

You're a navy man
Your life is so blue
When it comes to the ocean
It's a part of you

You're a navy man
Your life is so blue
When it comes to the ocean
It's a part of you

You're a navy man

I made a couple of minor edits on the track. Demo vocal for now.

Make It Up As We Go Along
by Mark Grim May 2026

I get the feeling we’ve been trying too hard
Thinkin’ too much, talkin’ too loud.
Let’s turn it down from eleven to one.
And make it up as we go along

I’ve had enough of this “reach for the stars”.
Givin’ our best isn’t getting’ us far. Let’s
give it a rest. It’s time to move on
and make it up as we go along. Well

Chorus:
somewhere I heard when the time is right/ ya let
go of the past but ya keep it in sight. / There’s a
whole lot of truth that’s hard to deny a
-bout to keep us talkin’ far into the night

instrumental verse:

Let’s talk it over with a bottle of wine. Or
maybe a few an’ get sloppy and blind.
You show me yours an’ I’ll show you mine./ We’ll
misbehave as if nothin’ was wrong /an’
make it up as we go along
make it up as we go along
We’ll make it up as we
We’ll make it up as we
We’ll make it up as we go along

the final revision of this song!

VERSE 1
What if love isn't meant to be found
But rather it waits for your guard to come down?
To set aside your history and look around at what might be….
What if finding love's nothing more than serendipity?

VERSE 2
What if love has always been around
But you couldn't see with your eyes looking down
The walls you built protected your heart
What if finding love means tearing them apart?

PRE-CHORUS
What if love’s been right here all along?
Guess I’ve gone about it … all wrong.

CHORUS
Small talk and martinis, hours spent alone with you.
I opened my eyes, that's all I had to do …
Call it what you will, doesn’t matter to me.
I found my love, as it was meant to be.

BRIDGE
The invitation came, it said don't be late.
Cocktails at six, dinner at eight.
I wasn't looking for love, but then, neither was he.
Quiet conversation, we talked ‘til three.
Notes on a napkin, dreams written in ink
A spilled martini, simply met with a wink.

VERSE 3
What if finding love was part of a plan
Two strangers moved by God’s quiet hand?
A gentle push, the pathway clear
Hmmm … maybe that’s what brought you here.

PRE-CHORUS
What if love’s been right here all along?
Guess I’ve gone about it … all wrong.

CHORUS
Small talk and martinis, hours spent just with you.
I opened my eyes, it’s all I had to do …
Call it what you will, doesn’t matter to me.
I found my love, as it was meant to be.

Hmmm …
Small talk and martinis … is how I found you.

Doug, I have to leave the zoom call by 6:45, if I can't be on the early side of the reviews, I can wait until next month. I have a Musiversal meeting to do a kickstart with this song and thought I'd get some feedback from MAS ahead of time … I have a beginning melody, which I did use with SUNO, and luckily SUNO completed it … but the final melody will likely be slightly different, so my focus for the review is on the lyrics. I know the back story … but does the story resonate or come across without knowing that???

I wrote this as a tribute to Dolly Parton. I wrote the lyrics and Suno did Vocal and music with my parameters.

(Back Woods Girl in Love)
(Intro)
What can I say?……………I’m just a back woods girl in love
You walk past me at work every day without a word or glance
And I pray for help from above
But it’s very clear with you I have no chance
(Chorus)
I know how to shoot a gun
Bait a trap, snare my dinner
Cook outdoors and have some fun
But with you at my side I’d be a winner
(Verse 1)
Every day I wear my best togs hoping you’ll look my way
But……I may as well be in the backwoods all alone
You just pass by day after day
When will you talk to me or call me on your phone?
(Chorus)
I know how to shoot a gun
Bait a trap, snare my dinner
Cook outdoors and have some fun
But with you at my side I’d be a winner
(Verse 2)
Today you past so close to me I could smell your cologne
And I heard you say to her “It looks like it’s over between us”
Then you actually looked at me as you put away your phone
You stopped, said hello, smiled and made a little fuss
(Chorus)
I know how to shoot a gun
Bait a trap, snare my dinner
Cook outdoors and have some fun
But with you at my side I’d be a winner
(Verse 3)
The next day you asked me on a date and sent me candy
This backwoods girl was shocked and a little scared
But everything turned out just dandy
We married and have some wonderful memories we shared
(Outro)
I know how to shoot a gun
Bait a trap, snare my dinner
Cook outdoors and have some fun
But with you at my side I’m now a winner
What can I say ……………I’m just a back woods girl in love…….
I’m just a back woods girl in love

(By Bill Fritz)

[Chords: | D | Cadd9 | G | D |]

I'm pretty much a Christian, but I got some Doubts
A Laundry List of questions, need to figure out
Some things don't make, a whole lot of sense
Like Adam and Eve, and the book of Genesis
The best explanation, that I could find
Is Jesus the Missing Years, according to Prine

[Chords: | Am | C | G | Am |]

Bible Thumpers Blues, and Yesterday's News
Send mixed messages, that I Can't use
Saturday's Sinners, become Sunday's Saints
Like a Chameleon, True Colors Change
The more they change, the more I stay the same
Everybody needs, somebody to blame

[Chords: | D | Cadd9 | G | D |]

Book Binders will sell you, their path to heaven
And how your transgressions, will be forgiven
One third of true believers, bet on Jesus Christ
That's thirty percent, that prayed they guessed right

[Chords: | Am | C | G | Am |]

Bible Thumpers Blues, and Yesterday's News
Send mixed messages, that I Can't use
Saturday's Sinners, become Sunday's Saints
Like a Chameleon, True Colors Change
The more they change, the more I stay the same
Everybody needs, somebody to blame

[Chords: | D7 | Fmaj7 | C | D7|]

No Longer in Focus, Dreams in the Rearview
Couldn't find Answers, watching Donahue
Changed the channel, turned on Doctor Phil
Keep It Simple Stupid, Keep it Real

[Chords: | Am | C | G | Am |]

Bible Thumpers Blues, and Yesterday's News
Send mixed messages, that I Can't use
Saturday's Sinners, become Sunday's Saints
Like a Chameleon, True Colors Change
The more they change, the more I stay the same
Everybody needs, somebody to blame
The more they change, the more I stay the same
Everybody needs, somebody to blame

(Back Woods Girl in Love)
(Intro)
What can I say?……………I’m just a back woods girl in love
You walk past me at work every day without a word or glance
And I pray for help from above
But it’s very clear with you I have no chance
(Chorus)
I know how to shoot a gun
Bait a trap, snare my dinner
Cook outdoors and have some fun
But with you at my side I’d be a winner
(Verse 1)
Every day I wear my best togs hoping you’ll look my way
But……I may as well be in the backwoods all alone
You just pass by day after day
When will you talk to me or call me on your phone?
(Chorus)
I know how to shoot a gun
Bait a trap, snare my dinner
Cook outdoors and have some fun
But with you at my side I’d be a winner
(Verse 2)
Today you past so close to me I could smell your cologne
And I heard you say to her “It looks like it’s over between us”
Then you actually looked at me as you put away your phone
You stopped, said hello, smiled and made a little fuss
(Chorus)
I know how to shoot a gun
Bait a trap, snare my dinner
Cook outdoors and have some fun
But with you at my side I’d be a winner
(Verse 3)
The next day you asked me on a date and sent me candy
This backwoods girl was shocked and a little scared
But everything turned out just dandy
We married and have some wonderful memories we shared
(Outro)
I know how to shoot a gun
Bait a trap, snare my dinner
Cook outdoors and have some fun
But with you at my side I’m now a winner
What can I say ……………I’m just a back woods girl in love…….
I’m just a back woods girl in love

I wanted to write a song to honor Dolly Parton I wrote the lyrics SUNO did the music and vocal. Hope you enjoy it.

NO DEBATING GRAVITY
By Paul Nye

VERSE 1:
Engine roars, smell of exhaust, cold chill in the air
10,000 feet, door slides open, wind rips through my hair
I look down, wait for the count, now I’m falling free
I know what I’m doin’ and it pleases me

VERSE 2:
Falling at 120, ‘chute comes out, my body rolls & twists
Spinning out of control, I look up say, “What the hell is this”
Tangled mess above my head, I’m staring down gravity
This one bad choice – it don’t look good for me

PRE-CHORUS:
I’d done this before, I know what I’m doin’
Thought this time I’d go my way
Bend one rule, chase a new thrill,
Ha, that’s what a fool would say

CHORUS:
Life is like skydiving
You choose the door, you make the call
But every fall will land you somewhere
Cuz gravity wont bend – it don’t care at all

VERSE 3:
I’ve stood at other doorways, felt that familiar rush
Knew I shouldn’t take that step, but wanted it so much
That’s when I remembered what the hard way had taught me
Some doors stay closed – to keep us free

PRE-CHORUS:
I’d done this before, I know what I’m doin’
Thought this time I’d go my way
Bend one rule, chase a new thrill,
Ha, that’s what a fool would say

CHORUS:
Life is like skydiving
You choose the door, you make the call
But every fall will land you somewhere
Cuz gravity wont bend – it don’t care at all

CHORUS:
Life is like skydiving
You choose the door, you make the call
But every choice will land you somewhere
Cuz gravity wont bend – it don’t care at all

“NO DEBATING GRAVITY” nyesguyTunes Publishing/BMI
© By Paul Nye * paulenye@me.com * 218.507.0081

When I was skydiving, jumpers would get a little cocky and over-confident. That's when accidents would happen. The skydiving story in this song is true. I used this false sense of self-confidence as a metaphor for other choices we make in life where we "bend the rules" and think we can get away with it.

LIKE A COUNTY GUY

VERSE 1:
Had to move from New York City to the Lone Star State
To this town that’s itty-bitty that the locals call a city
A a northerner outsider I couldn’t get a date

VERSE 2:
Had to learn how to behave in ways women admired
The words of country songs showed me how to get along
They taught me what I should do now my love life is great

CHORUS:
Live like a country guy in my new habitat
Wear Wrangler jeans leather boots and a black cowboy hat
You might call it a disguise
But now I’m living like a country guy

VERSE 3:
I’m in my pickup truck a pretty young thing at my side
Got a dog in the back and a rifle on the rack
Another Saturday night in my dusty Texas town

VERSE 4:
A can of Bud tucked in the holder we’re out for a ride,
She’s cozies up to my shoulder things are startin’ to smolder
Gonna park down by the river watch the sun go down

CHORUS:
Live like a country guy in my new habitat
Wear Wrangler jeans leather boots and a black cowboy hat
You might call it a disguise
But now I’m living like a country guy

BRIDGE:
Yeah I’m a cowboy who’s never sat in a saddle
They call that all hat and no cattle

VERSE 5:
Traded my New York accent for this southern twang
Locked the Saab in the garage bought a red Ram Dodge
Got a dog from the pound my rifle’s never left the truck

VERSE 6:
I shoot pool with all my new friends at the honky tonk saloon
I go line dancin’ ‘cause it leads to sweet romancing
Glad I decided to go country ain’t never going back

CHORUS:
Live like a country guy in my new habitat
Wear Wrangler jeans leather boots and a black cowboy hat
You might call it a disguise
But now I’m living like a country guy
Might be the truth or a lie
But now I’m living like a country guy

©2026 | Greg Beck Music | 320-266-2460

[VERSE ONE]
I went from holding your hand
To holding on for life
Went from being your hero
To the villain in your innocent eyes

Just like that, my world went cold
All light was extinguished by the dark
Loving you was all I ever wanted
But I was forced to love you from afar

[PRE-CHORUS ONE]
And I was losing my mind with losing you
God knows, everyone noticed
‘Cause I couldn’t tell the difference
Between the noise in my head
And the truth I knew I’d spoken

[CHORUS ONE]
And every step
Left me questioning
Questioning
Was I gonna make it?
Was I gonna make it?
Make it without you?

[VERSE TWO]
I went from holding my breath
To holding an ounce of hope
You’re right in front of my eyes
Yet, it’s like looking through a broken kaleidoscope

Just like that, everything’s changing
In ways almost too good to be true
I'm ecstatic and shattered with sorrow
Learning about you and the Hell you went through

[PRE-CHORUS TWO]
‘Cause it’s hurting me knowing you were hurting
God knows, someone must’ve noticed
But I never could’ve imagined
The extent of the damage
Went much deeper than the truth I’d spoken

[CHORUS TWO]
And every step
Has me questioning
Questioning
Are we gonna make it?
Are we gonna make it?
Make it through?

[BRIDGE]
I keep blaming myself
For not doing more
I should’ve tried harder
‘Cause you were never not worth fighting for
Then once again
You amaze me
With a grace, I swear I don’t deserve

And bit by bit
That broken kaleidoscope
Is becoming our stained glass opus
The same pieces, a different picture
Just the light now pulling focus

[FINAL CHORUS]
Yet, every step
Still leaves me questioning
Questioning
Are we gonna make it?
Are we gonna make it?

[OUTRO]
Hell yeah, we’re gonna make it

We’ll make it through
Yeah, we'll make it through

Bargain With The Wind Millaway/Aalgard ©2026

It seems too late to ask forgiveness
The tide has already turned
When life is feeble and pain is near
Damn those bridges I once burned

The dangers were invisible
But the warning signs were there

Trying to bargain with the wind
Spins me round and round
All the cards I used to play
Are suddenly nowhere to be found

I never thought about tomorrow
When life was nothing but fun
Regret took over expectation
Negotiations said and done

I couldn't see the danger,
though the signs were there.

Trying to bargain with the wind
Spins me round and round
All the cards I used to play
Are suddenly nowhere to be found

The time for prayer is before the pain
The time for talking is before the need
The hand that gives fear and hope
Grows best when planted as a seed

I couldn't see the danger,
though the signs were there.

Trying to bargain with the wind
Spins me round and round
All the cards I used to play
Are suddenly nowhere to be found

I thought the dangers were invisible
Now I know the signs were there

This will not be the arrangement on the song as Angie is developing an original melody and bridge. Mostly concerned with the lyrics on this one for now.

[Verse 1]
You were busy dreaming
Of money and power
She was busy needing
The man you once were

You lost your bearings
Chasing dollar signs
She lost her everything
So she said goodbye

[Pre-Chorus]
She would have stayed
If you hadn’t changed
She wants what you had
No gift can change that

[Chorus]
She’d come back to you
She’d come back to you
She’d come back to you
She’d come back to you
Just be who she loves again

[Verse 2]
You thought you gave
Anything she wanted
She thought you betrayed
Everything she trusted

You lived for parties
With pretty people
She lived for memories
When life was simple

[Pre-Chorus]
She would be yours again
If you would return to when
She was what mattered
Not how much you earned

[Chorus]
She’d come back to you
She’d come back to you
She’d come back to you
She’d come back to you
Just be who she loves again

[Bridge]
Designer bags, expensive cars
Won’t get you very far
In winning her heart
Be who she fell for
Before you needed more

[Chorus]
She’d come back to you
She’d come back to you
She’d come back to you
She’d come back to you
Just be who she loves again

SLIPPERY DEVIL

INTRO CHORUS

I'm a slippery devil, oh oh oh
Only caught if I wanna be
I move too quick, you can't hold me
Cause I'm a slippery devil, oh oh oh

VERSE 1

I can read your game, before you even say hello
Clocked those eyes, from across the room's glow
Save your lines, I already know that show
If I get caught, it's because I choose.

CHORUS
I'm a slippery devil, oh oh oh
Only caught if I want to be
I move too quick, you can't hold me
Cause I'm a slippery devil, oh oh oh
Only caught if I want to be-eeeee.

VERSE 2

I set the rules, I'm the real deal
I'm damn smart, with a lot of sex appeal
Catch me if you can, bring more than a line
Brains and heart, make it worth my time
Play me wrong, color me gone
Watch me go-go-go, go go

BRIDGE

I used to be mousy, quiet and shy
One night a dream, lit up my sky
Take back my life – now hear my battle cry

OUTRO CHORUS (x Two)

I'm a slippery devil, oh oh oh
Only caught if I want to be
I move too quick, you can't hold me
Cause I'm a slippery devil, oh oh oh
Only caught if I want to be-eee
Only caught if I want to be-eee

This is my first pop song I have written. Started with a beat, added lyrics, melody and rhythm. Created my song demo and used enhanced Ai tools for female vocals and instrumentation. I am in the process of creating a female virtual entertainer to perform this song on a video for steaming platforms and my website. Thanks for listening.

(Minnesota)

(Intro)
The crystal-clear water reflects from the lake
Skies so blue make no mistake
Why and where have the fish gone from the deep
Has mother-nature forgotten this northern gem………… or is she just asleep
(Chorus)
Minnesota have you really gone away
My childhood memories of you seem like yesterday
Fish, birds and forest creatures disappeared, so cruel
I should have stayed and protected this jewel
(Verse 1
The sky was once covered by waterfowl, what a charm
Pheasants abounded on every farm
Hunt and fish every season was the rule
Leaving this garden of Eden,…….. I must have been a fool

(Chorus)
Minnesota have you really gone away
My childhood memories of you seem like yesterday
Fish, birds and forest creatures disappeared, so cruel
I should have stayed and protected this jewel

(Verse 2)
The mightiest of the great lakes is invaded by mussel
I remember lake trout giving me such a tussle
Lake Mill Lacs was once a walleye producing wonder
The population loss is such a terrible blunder
(Chorus)
Minnesota have you really gone away
My childhood memories of you seem like yesterday
Fish, birds and forest creatures disappeared, so cruel
I should have stayed and protected this jewel

Waterfowl fly to a reserve south of the state
Pheasants for pay is now the hunter’s fate
Lakes are infested by invasive plants and fish
These events are certainly not our wish
(Bridge)
What have we done to the land of sky blue waters?
What will we tell our sons and daughters?
The North Star State is not what it used to be
Nature is ignored and the consequences are plain to see
(Outro)
Minnesota have you really gone away
My childhood memories of you seem like yesterday
Fish, birds and forest creatures disappeared, so cruel
I should have stayed and protected this jewel

I was talking with some my old hunting buddies in Minnesota and I was amazed at the hunting and fishing changes that have happened since I moved to California in 1989.
That inspired me to write this song.

I wrote the lyrics and SUNO did the vocal and music with my input

City on the Hill – 2026
Terry Kennedy-Lares

Don’t tell me about your Jesus
the Savior of your soul.
Don’t tell me about your Jesus
the Savior of your soul.
He washed away your Sins
He picked you up when you were low.

Don’t quote from the Bible,
Scriptures you read in the book
Don’t quote me from the Bible,
Scriptures you chose from the book
Framed the way you want them,
Just to let you off the hook.

Don’t you tell me you love Jesus,
Cause I’ve seen the way you vote
Don’t you tell me you love Jesus,
Cause I’ve seen the way you vote
Tax cuts for the rich man,
a political inside joke.

It’s not remotely shiny,
your City on the Hill
No, it’s not remotely shiny,
up in your City on the Hill
Where you trade your soul for power,
and money is a bitter pill.

Now don’t you tell me you love Jesus,
when there are folks you would deport
Don’t you tell me you love Jesus,
When there are folks you would deport
ICE is shooting people down,
and that’s what you support.

So, tell me about Jesus,
the man who loved and served the poor,
Can you tell me about Jesus,
the man who loved and served the poor,
Will you follow in his foot steps
Will you walk through that door.

I think i'm getting pretty close to done on this song, but I'm interested in hearing what the overall feeling people get from this.

We tied the knot, back in 94
Neither of us, went that far before
Must have been Blind Love, Destiny or Fate
Lord knows, we made our share of mistakes

Doing It All Wrong, but that's Alright
Got each other to hold, Don't Think Twice
Doing all the Wrong Things, for the Right Reasons
Love sure is, Something to Believe In

Bought us a House, put a Dog in the Yard
We were expecting, but lost Destiny's Child
I Made a few Dollars, then Pissed Them Away
You stayed by My Side, with each Wrong Turn I made

Doing It All Wrong, but that's Alright
Got each other to hold, Don't Think Twice
Doing all the Wrong Things, for the Right Reasons
Love sure is, Something to Believe In

Looking Back now, I wouldn't change a thing
Not our Wedding Cake, with that Ball and Chain
Nor the Illinois Two-Step, when you Called Out My Name
Looking Back now, I wouldn't change a thing

Doing It All Wrong, but that's Alright
Got each other to hold, Don't Think Twice
Doing all the Wrong Things, for the Right Reasons
Love sure is, Something to Believe In

VERSE ONE
It is 2 o’clock and I’m shaken to my core.
Remnants of a dream I justcan’t ignore.
Like landscapes after a thunderstorm,
Images … ravaged and torn.
I’ve dreamed this dream before.

Ooooohhhh.

CHORUS
Peaceful sleep – I long for more
To rest my soul, my peace restore.
To erase the memories that cause my pain.
I never want to dream this dream again.

BRIDGE
Hail on the window gives way to fright.
Howling winds terrorize the night.
Thunder roars with all its might.
I fear the morning’s tearful sights.

Oooooaaaaah …….

VERSE TWO
Storms may come and storms may go,
But tornadoes care not where they go
Strong and fierce, and running free,
They dance in the sky, chasing me.

CHORUS
Peaceful sleep – I long for more
To rest my mind, my peace restore.
To calm the memories that caused my pain.
I never want to dream this dream again.

OUTRO
Never dream this dream again ….

Never Dream This Dream Again is for the July 2026 song challenge. Words used: Landscape, Thunderstorm. I am working on the melody, but it isn't ready so the music (and vocals) is all SUNO. SUNO style prompts: Tense, dreamy ballad, dark, moody. Female vocal, strong percussion, violins

Song Challenge – MN Association of Songwriters, August 2026
Fried, Squirrel, Towel, Chips, Frame, Toothpick, Keyboard, Button, Pergola
Words Used: Buttons, Shining, Keyboard, Soft, Exceedingly
Lyrics by Sheryl Bohlander – Vocals and Music by SUNO
Style Description: Cool jazz, piano, keyboards, saxophone, drums, guitar, soft, sultry female vocals

VERSE 1
How I miss the Age Of Swing,
Dizzy and Krupah and Benny was King.
There’s In The Mood and Mack the Knife,
And, who could forget – Begin the Begeene!

CHORUS
Ballrooms with their shiny lights,
Glamour was on display at night.
Spats with buttons, chiffon that swirled,
The Big Band era was cool as ice.

VERSE 2
Bluesy jazz ruled with Sarah Vaughn.
Django ripped his gypsy guitar sound,
The Count and Duke teased the keyboards.
And for all those years, the band played on.

CHORUS
Ballrooms with their shiny lights,
Glamour was on display at night.
Spats with buttons, chiffon that swirled.
The Big Band era was cool as ice.

BRIDGE
Closing my eyes, the band appear.
The greats of jazz play in my ear.
Hello Dolly, What A Wonderful World,
Ahh, my memories are exceedingly clear.

CHORUS
Ballrooms with their shiny lights,
Glamour was on display at night.
Spats with buttons, chiffon that swirled,
The Big Band era was cool as ice.

Oh the Big Bands …. Cool as ice.
Cool As Ice.

This is the August 2026 Song challenge. Words Used: Buttons, Shining, Keyboard, Soft, Exceedingly
Lyrics by Sheryl Bohlander – Vocals and Music by SUNO
Style Description: Cool jazz, piano, keyboards, saxophone, drums, guitar, soft, sultry female vocals
I haven't composed my own melody (working on it), so the music is all AI.

HOLDIN’ MY LEVI’S ON By Paul Nye
VERSE 1: I'm packin' up my suitcase, had enough of me Gonna drive my old truck down to Tennessee Banker stopped returnin' every call I've made Even my dog won’t answer when I call his name But that shiny brass button's still holdin' on.
CHORUS: My kids done grew up, friends all moved along Everybody's talkin' ‘bout how life done them wrong Searched everywhere..("Cliché alert!”) 'til the cows came home Got nothin’ I trust… ‘cept that button on the Levi’s I own
VERSE 2: Worn out more blue jeans than I can recall Pulled ‘em on, only to watch them fall Life keeps on changin’ without warnin’ But that button shows up for work every mornin’ Yeah, that shiny button’s still holdin’ on
CHORUS: My kids done grew up, friends all moved along Everybody's talkin' ‘bout how life done them wrong Searched everywhere..("Cliché alert!”) 'til the cows came home Got nothin’ I trust… ‘cept that button on the Levi’s I own
BRIDGE: Yeah, my life might be fallin' apart, But I ain't doin' no sobbin’ Gonna get up in the tomorrow and keep on problem solvin’ 'Cause right now that button’s the only thing holdin' me together …And if it quits… ya gonna see me in the altogether.
LAST CHORUS:
Buttons don't lie… They just do their part 
Never break a promise, Never break your heart 
Everything else may come undone 
But, that shiny brass button keeps my Levi’s up and on 
'Cause that little round thing on my jeans won’t let me or them down

The Mastermind of Thunderstorms
Terry Kennedy-Lares 2026

His name was William Landscape
Mastermind of Thunderstorms
in disguise he moved among us
behind all that had gone wrong
Aphasic to our faces
he sang his crazy song
William Landscape was an artist
an artist of the Con.

Chorus:
That Mastermind of Thunderstorms
Flashed lightening all around
Spreading Chaos through the land
No peace could be found.

The fattened calf was sacrificed
We all watched them play the game
figments of democracy
Burnt offerings just the same
apathetic promises
were his stock in trade
to control the teeming masses
keeping them at bay

Chorus

Where do we go from here
how do we face our fear
standing up to the man
Facing up to the lies
all of the alibis
heads coming out of the sand

Chorus

a person stood up one day
to challenge all the lies
and those brave actions
inspired other lives
those apathetic promises
would never come true
and so began the future
for me and for you.

Still working on this even though I've started others.

[VERSE ONE]
Sunday mornings in a wooden pew
Day and night, I’m reaching out to you
Where are you, Jesus?
You said you’d be here soon

Sending up so many endless prayers
Often through tears when there are no words
I still believe You can hear me
Even when the quiet hurts

Hands held high, my heart’s hanging low
I’m overwhelmed by such deep sorrow
Where are you, Jesus?
Ohhh, I really need You

[PRE-CHORUS ONE]
Mmmm…
I call Your name
Hoping You would take the pain

[CHORUS ONE]
Where are you, Jesus?
You said You’d be here soon

[VERSE TWO]
I know to focus on the words in red
‘Cause they’re the ones that You had said
They say I’m loved, and You’ll never leave
But sometimes I can barely breathe

So, I read them over one more time
Searching through every single line
I’m trying hard to find the strength to trust
But sometimes all I want is to just give up

[PRE-CHORUS TWO]
Mmmm…
I call Your name
Again and again and again and again

[CHORUS TWO]
Where are you, Jesus?
You said you’d be here soon
You said You’re making all things new
But I’m still waiting here for You to move
Oh
Where are you, Jesus?
Where are you, Jesus?

[BRIDGE]
Have I been broken for just too long
That you’ve forgotten me?
Or maybe You’re closer than I know
At work in places I can’t see

So, teach my heart
To hear Your voice
’Cause I need Your help
To drown out all the noise

[FINAL CHORUS]
Where are you, Jesus?
You said you’d be here soon
I keep searching for Your light
Even in the darkest room
Oh…
If You’re teaching me to wait
Please – at least help heal these wounds
Ohhh
Where are you, Jesus?
You said you’d be here soon
Where are you, Jesus?
You said you’d be here soon

Let’s Make It Up As We Go Along
May 2026

I get the feeling we’ve been trying too hard
Thinkin’ too much, talkin’ too loud.
Let’s turn it down from eleven to one.
And make it up as we go along

I’ve had enough of this “reachin’ for stars”./ Let’s
put it to rest, it ain’t workin’ out. We’ve
given our best, it’s time to move on
and make it up as we go along. / I don’t

Chorus:
know how I know that the time is right/ to let
go of the past but to keep it in sight. /There’s a
whole lotta truth that’s hard to deny. E-/
nough to keep us talkin’ far into the night

instrumental verse:

Let’s start it over with a bottle of wine. Or
maybe a few an’ get sloppy and blind.
You show me yours an’ I’ll show you mine./ We’ll
misbehave as if nothin’ was wrong /an’
make it up as we go along
make it up as we go along
We’ll make it up as we
We’ll make it up as we
We’ll make it up as we go along

The motif for this song was provided by a phenomenal saxophone solo performed at the Schooner Tavern with Cornbread Harris’ band. I thought to myself he’s makin’ it up as he goes along. Ding! ding! ding!

Yesterday Becomes Today

Verse 1
We ran barefoot chasing endless summer skies
Carefree days, country roads, burgers, shakes and fries
Drive-in movies, secrets shared around a campfire's glow
Polaroids and teenage dreams, swore we'd never outgrow

Pre-Chorus
Who knew those years would fade away
We'd wake up watching our beautiful children play
As the years roll on we live on yesterday
This road we're traveling only runs one way

Chorus
Yesterday becomes today
Yesterday becomes today

Verse 2
College town, army boots, wedding rings, baby shoes
Punch a clock, raise our babies, try to pay our dues
Middle age came rolling in, where did all the years go
Gaze in the mirror, that forever-young face won't show

Pre-Chorus
Who knew those years would fade away
We'd wake up watching our beautiful children play
As the years roll on we live on yesterday
This road we're traveling only runs one way

Chorus
Yesterday becomes today
Yesterday becomes today

Bridge
We spent forever
Chasing tomorrow
And the days crawled on by
But the years waved bye bye

Pre-Chorus
Who knew those years would fade away
We'd wake up watching our beautiful children play
As the years roll on we live on yesterday
This road we're traveling only runs one way

Chorus
Yesterday becomes today
Yesterday becomes today

I presented this song at the last song review and made the following changes as suggested by our group. Redid the melody on chorus, changed bridge to a better rhyme scheme, streamlined lyrics for better song flow. Made demo used Ai enhancement tools to change vocals to a duet. Thanks for your comments.

Thorns and Roses (Revised 07/15/26)
Bill Fritz
(Intro)
Rose you were my beautiful flower
I thought of you every day and every hour
You were so sexy and sweet
And my love for you was so complete
(Chorus)
Rose, now you’re only a thorn in my side
You broke my heart and trampled my pride
You’re a wild flower who has to be free
So, I locked up my heart and threw away the key
(1st Verse)
A rose has soft pedals and sharp thorns
I got too close and my heart was torn
Our love is over, there is no heat
I’m a broken man in love’s defeat
(Chorus)
Rose, now you’re only a thorn in my side
You broke my heart and trampled my pride
You’re a wild flower who has to be free
So, I locked up my heart and threw away the key

(2nd Verse)
Rose I had to find another life away from you
And be with someone who will love me and be true
You’re both beautiful and alluring
But the pain you cause is too concerning
(Chorus)
Rose, now you’re only a thorn in my side
You broke my heart and trampled my pride
You’re a wild flower who has to be free
So, I locked up my heart and threw away the key
Outro)
Rose your thorns pierced my heart
You were trouble from the start
But now that we’re apart
I‘ll find the key that unlocks my broken heart (End)

(Copyright All rights reserved 10/10/25 to William J. Fritz and jimmy Fat Fingers
AI provided music and vocal via SUNO)

Secret Hideaway

The lighting was just right
To capture that moment in time
When laughter filled the frame
All the planets seemed aligned
Wish we could bottle the feeling
Wish we could store some away
Pull it out when we need it
To get us through one of those days

One of these days we’ll need each other
One of these days might happen soon
Reach into that secret hideaway
Don’t wait for the next blue moon

Remember what young love feels like?
There’s not a lot that can compare
As days begin melting into each other
Love changes, and that don’t seem fair
Wish we could bottle that feeling
Wish we could store some away
The thing about getting older
Is the word you forget to say

One of these days we’ll find each other
One of these days will happen soon
Reach into that secret hideaway
Don’t wait for the next blue moon

Snapshots may be fun to look at
But they can mess with your troubled mind
Somehow we need to figure out
How to make the past and the present rhyme

One of these days we’ll hold each other
One of these days it’ll all make sense
Reach into that box of photographs
Make every single one present tense
Reach into that box of photographs
Make every single one present tense

This is a SUNO arrangement of my melody and lyrics. What do you think the title should be? Should I repeat the final chorus?

Verse 1
You had a guilty conscience
Needed to get something off your chest
So you spilled it all to a friend
Who you knew would let you vent

She gave you a pinky swear
She wouldn’t tell a soul
But from the moment you turned your back
Her lips were on go

Chorus
You wanted to keep your dirty little deeds
Hidden far away from me
You never wanted me to find out
How you broke your vows
But you can’t stop secrets from going around
When you share them with a big mouth in a small town

Verse 2
She couldn’t keep her trap shut
So I guess I owe her a thank you
For showing me what you are
And letting me hear the truth

Now your clothes are on the lawn
And your PS5 is in the trash
Your time with me is over
You went too far for us to come back

Chorus
You wanted to keep your dirty little deeds
Hidden far away from me
You never wanted me to find out
How you broke your vows
But you can’t stop secrets from going around
When you share them with a big mouth in a small town

Bridge
You thought telling her would be the end
But she told all her friends
Now the whole town knows
And your good guy cover’s blown

Chorus
You wanted to keep your dirty little deeds
Hidden far away from me
You never wanted me to find out
How you broke your vows
But you can’t stop secrets from going around
When you share them with a big mouth in a small town
Oh yeah
She’s a big mouth in a small town

[VERSE ONE]
It’s one of my “Red Light Devotions”
I still make a wish when the clock shows twenty-three
I spent years holding out for the “what-ifs”
I’ve held onto hope that never held onto me

Every time I thought I saw it coming
It would fade away before I could get close
Now what I’ve wanted all these years
Is right here… but I don’t know

[PRE-CHORUS ONE]
I’ve learned to live with disappointment
Like it’s flowing through my veins
And it seems like disappointment is what I’ve become these days

[CHORUS]
If this is real
Why am I so terrified?
Why am I grieving what I’ve waited for
For the last eight years of my life?
This is everything I’ve wanted – NEEDED
So, why am I so damn afraid?
Is this finally everything I’ve prayed for
Or just another masquerade?

[VERSE TWO]
Everyone says I should be smiling – happy
After all, this is “all I’ve wanted all along”
But no one seems to recall the wreckage
Every time believing turned out wrong

I’ve collected years of heartbreaks
They’re etched into scars on my chest
So, now even kindness feels suspicious
And every blessing feels like another test

[PRE-CHORUS TWO]
I keep looking for the catch or for the floor to disappear
‘Cause when you’ve been let down enough
Even miracles don’t feel sincere

[CHORUS TWO]
If this is real
Why am I so terrified?
Why am I grieving what I’ve waited for
Why can’t I look you in the eye?
This is everything I’ve wanted – NEEDED
So, why do I still feel so damn betrayed?
Is this finally my dream come true
Or just another masquerade?

[BRIDGE]
I don’t think I’m scared of the situation
Just scared to believe it’s here
'ause I know that I’m not strong enough
To survive watching it disappear
Yeah, I’ve gotten good at crying
But I can’t get my hopes up again
Just to watch them crash and burn

[FINAL CHORUS]
If this is real
Why am I so terrified?
Why am I grieving what I’ve waited for
For the last eight years of my life?
This is everything I’ve wanted – NEEDED
So, why am I so damn afraid?
Is this finally everything I’ve prayed for
Or just another masquerade?

[OUTRO]
Oh, I just wish for a moment
All the masks would be removed
Every lie revealed
And you would see
I was telling you the truth

Umm… I literally just wrote this around 4:30 this afternoon, so be gentle. 😂 The lyrics and melody are mine, but the music and vocals are AI. I recorded the melody a cappella, then uploaded it to SUNO with prompts.

Good Storm

I woke up and the sun was in my eyes
I was hopin’ for better but it’s sunny outside
It’s so sunny outside

My head hurts I’ve been drinkin’ in my dreams
I’m sober, it’s the only way to get some relief
I need relief, can I get some relief

We need a good storm to cover up the skies
We need the clouds to roll in and make a place to hide
We need thunder, we need rain, we need to feel it, feel the pain
And get relief, can I get some relief

I can’t wear it, fake smile, blue sky, summer day, I can’t lie, I’m not feelin’ it
If I try to be what you need me to be I know I can’t, I already tried that
I need the windows shut, I need to button up, I need to cry
until I’m done, you gotta let me be, you don’t need to go, but don’t make me leave
I gotta get some relief, can I get some relief

We need a good storm to cover up the skies
We need the clouds to roll in and make a place to hide
We need thunder, we need rain, we need to feel it, feel the pain
And get relief, can I get some relief

Octagonal Warmth (2026)
Terry Kennedy-Lares

I woke up this morning, the sun was in my eyes,
I cursed the light that blessed me, thru clear blue skies,
and the job that paid me, to get out of my bed,
Looking for direction from my ego-centric head.

Chorus:
Octagonal warmth with come my way
with eight rays of love, to show me the way
If eight acts of kindness, are my goal
Octagonal warmth will feed my soul.

Driving down the roads, I was only half awake,
a mad man cut me off, for his own damn sake,
my finger flew up high, I’m such a crazy guy,
Looking for direction in the geo-mythical sky.

The material world and the spiritual realm,
Cosmic balance has eight sides in the end,
it’s the principles of life, which way should I go,
Looking for direction for my geo-amorous soul.

Chorus and outro.

What can I say, it's not done yet, but I'm kinda obsessed with trying to make it work.

Empty House

VERSE 1
The sound of my own footsteps echos off the walls
As I take one final trip through the rooms and down the halls
Our old house is as empty now as the feeling I have inside
When I think about what I’ve become since her love for me died

VERVE 2
We had been together since we were only teens
I was her knight in shining armor and she was my queen
A storybook beginning that didn’t have a happy ending
When love becomes one-sided there’s no use in pretending

CHORUS
Empty house empty arms empty life
Still in love with a woman no longer my wife
She told me I was not to blame
The flame had just gone out
All I am left with are my memories and this old empty house
All I am left with are my memories and this old empty house

VERSE 3
I think back on our excitement when we first moved in
We couldn’t wait for our new life in our new home to begin
We had saved and sacrificed now this was our reward
It wasn’t quite our dream home but what we could afford

CHORUS
Empty house empty arms empty life
Still in love with a woman no longer my wife
She told me I was not to blame
The flame had just gone out
All I am left with are my memories and this old empty house
All I am left with are my memories and this old empty house

VERSE 4
Now all the things we had that make a house into a home
Have been boxed up and hauled away, our garden overgrown
In my mind I see what used to be in every room I pass by
All I can do is stand and stare, I’ve got no tears left to cry

CHORUS
Empty house empty arms empty life
Still in love with a woman no longer my wife
She told me I was not to blame
The flame had just gone out
All I am left with are my memories and this old empty house
All I am left with are my memories and this old empty house

©2026 | Greg Beck Music | 320-266-2460

MY CHORUS
© by Paul Nye

VERSE 1:
I wanna write a song better than it sounds
And play it for a singer-songwriter round
I wanna write a song best as I can
Shouldn’t be too hard for this songwritin’ man

(ANTI) PRE-CHORUS:
Right here is where I should sing my chorus
But, Verse 2 might have a sexy “meta-for-us”

VERSE 2:
(You see) writing a new song is complicated
Where so-called tools are really rules someone created
They say, “Get to the Chorus…don’t bore us”
So let me introduce you to “My Chorus”

CHORUS:
This song is my chorus, “My Chorus”
My incredibly catchy, unique chorus
Couldn’t find the right word in my Thesaurus
That’s why I call this song “My Chorus”

VERSE 3:
There was a hit song in the 60s, ‘bout Henry, the King
(But) the lyrics didn’t mean a thing.
Herman’s Hermits sang,“2nd verse, same as the 1st”
There goes every writin’ rule I’ve rehearsed

CHORUS:
This song is my chorus, “My Chorus”
My incredibly catchy unique chorus
Couldn’t find the right word in my Thesaurus
That’s why I call this song “My Chorus”

BRIDGE:
I’ve heard it said, “Omit needless words – be terse”
That’s a bit ironic in this over-written verse

CHORUS:
I’m gonna call this song “My Chorus,”
My incredibly catchy original chorus
I gave up on my worthless Thesaurus
‘Cause all them so-called “tools” are cliché, of “COR-us” (course)
And if no one ever pays me for this
At least I got to write “My Chorus”

Just for fun, just' cause I'm that way.

WHY NOW
This is amazing, I think you’re terrific
It’s amazing
So extraordinary that I’m meeting you
Not great timing, you surprised me

WHY NOW, WHY NOT BEFORE
WHEN I WAS YOUNGER, NOT GOTTEN TIRED
WHY NOW, WHY NOT BEFORE
WHEN I WAS YOUNGER, BUT I’LL TRY AGAIN

Here we go, walkin’ down the road
It’s not over yet, it’s not over
Put down the map, it never made much sense
I’m not going that way, I’m not done yet
Not socially normal, don't know how to older
I still feel like a kid and won't quit

WHY NOW, WHY NOT BEFORE……

I’ll keep my dreams, why would I throw them away
I will find another version,
It was never gonna turn out how we imagined anyway
I accept my past and what I’ve done with it
Suddenly my point of view has shifted
Everything looks different and I don’t know what to do with this
Suddenly my point of view has shifted
Everything looks different and I don’t know what to do with this

WHY NOW, WHY NOT BEFORE…….

[Verse 1]
My lipstick is flawless
Not a hair out of place
But here I sit again
Black tears streaming down my face

Soon you'll be home
With another lame excuse
Thinking I'll stand by my man
Like a good girl's supposed to do

[pre-Chorus]
Instead, I'm gonna fix my makeup
And then start this breakup

[chorus]
Once I’ve got my perfectly made-up eyes
My mouth will be yelling bye-bye
My ears won’t hear one more of your lies
My legs will carry me out of your life
My hands will cut the last of our ties
And I’ll take myself back, body and mind
This time my mascara’s the only part of me…
That… ain’t gonna run

[Verse 2]
I'm sure you’ll think saying sorry
will get you another chance
But no more, I'll be leaving
without a backward glance

I'll be jumping in the car
throwing it in drive
Slamming my foot on the gas
and making that motor fly

[pre-chorus]
When I finally look in the rearview
I'll see a twinkle that's brand new

[Chorus]
Once I’ve got my perfectly made-up eyes
My mouth will be yelling bye-bye
My ears won’t hear one more of your lies
My legs will carry me out of your life
My hands will cut the last of our ties
And I’ll take myself back, body and mind
This time my mascara’s the only part of me…
That… ain’t gonna run

[bridge]
You want to live your life like you're a single man
Well good news, honey, starting today, you can

[Chorus]
Now that I’ve got perfectly made-up eyes
My mouth is yelling bye-bye
My ears can’t hear one more of your lies
My legs carried me out of your life
My hands cut the last of our ties
And I took myself back, body and mind
This time my mascara’s the only part of me…
That… ain’t gonna run

Ain’t gonna run
Ain’t gonna run
Ain’t gonna run
Ain’t gonna run

I rewrote the chorus and tweaked the melody.

Today Spins to Yesterday

Verse 1
We ran barefoot chasing endless summer skies
Carefree days, country roads, burger's, shakes and fries
Drive-in movies, secrets shared, around a campfire's glow
Polaroids, teenage dreams thought we'd never outgrow.

Chorus
Today spins to yesterday
Like dust behind a rusty Chevrolet
We wake up watching our children play
We believed our youth would never fade away
The road we're traveling only runs one-way
Today spins, today spins to yesterday

Verse 2
College town, army boots, wedding rings and baby shoes.
Punch a clock, raise our babies, try to pay our dues
Middle age came rolling in, where did all the years go
Gaze in the mirror, that forever-young face don't show

Chorus
Today spins to yesterday
Like dust behind a rusty Chevrolet
We wake up watching our children play
We believed our youth would never fade away
The road we're traveling only runs one-way
Today spins, today spins to yesterday

Bridge
We spent forever chasing tomorrow
Never seeing what we'd lose
Funny how the days crawl by
Then the years don't wait

Chorus
Today spins to yesterday
Like dust behind a rusty Chevrolet
We wake up watching our children play
We believed our youth would never fade away
The road we're traveling only runs one-way
Today spins, today spins to yesterday
Today spins to yesterday

This song is a work in progress.100% human written lyrics and melody. I submitted my song demo and used enhanced Ai tools for vocals and polished instrumentation. I am reasonably happy with "show me" lyrics, but need some suggestions on better chorus melody. Thanks for listening.

(Who Knew Kalamazoo)

(Verse1)
I wore a hole in my shoe wandering from Chicago to Kalamazoo
I walked three weeks just to get somewhere new
But when I arrived there was no place to sleep or eat
So, I spend most of my time on the street
(Chorus)
Who knew, who knew, who knew I’d end up in Kalamazoo
But it’s now my home brand new
Who knew, who knew, who knew I’d end up in Kalamazoo
Or fall in love with my beautiful Sue
(Verse 2)
We met at a free kitchen one chilly night
It’s amazing she even looked at me, I was such a sight
Sue was an angel, a shining light in the dark
I asked her out that very night for a walk in the park
(Chorus)
Who knew, who knew, who knew I’d end up in Kalamazoo
But It’s now my home brand new
Who knew, who knew, who knew I’d end up in Kalamazoo
Or fall in love with my beautiful Sue

Sue told me she just left a bad relationship
I pulled out my flask and offered her a sip
Sue looked at me and asked, “Why?”
She said she gave up the drink and so should I

(Chorus)
Who knew, who knew, who knew I’d end up in Kalamazoo
But it’s now my home brand new
Who knew, who knew, who knew I’d end up in Kalamazoo
Or fall in love with my beautiful Sue
(Verse 3)
I knew right then and there Sue was the one
My life of love for her had just begun
Sue saved me from my life of pain
Eventually we both jumped aboard the love train
(Outro)
We married in Kalamazoo
It’s now our home brand new
Who knew, who knew, who knew I’d end up in Kalamazoo
Who knew, who knew, who knew I’d end up in Kalamazoo
Thank you Kalamazoo for my beautiful Sue

The lyrics are mine and SUNO produced the music and vocal

If You Saw Your Life Doug Millaway ©2026

If you saw your life from a mountain top,
What in the world would you see?
Would you see all the things you’ve done?
Is there an arrow pointing to me?

If you saw your life on the outskirts of town
Would I stand out despite the forest and trees?
Would you point at me and wave hello?
Is there a blinking light right above me?

I hope I made an impression somehow
At least that’s what I tried to do.
I might be insignificant in this big old world
But I think I mean something to you
At least I hope that’s true.

If you saw your life from a glass bottom boat.
There might be shipwrecks and tons of rust
Dancing amongst all the fish in the sea
Would there be any reminders of us?

People worry about whether they matter
They worry nobody will care
They worry they may never feel love
Sometimes they don’t even dare.

I hope I made an impression somehow
At least that’s what I tried to do.
I might be insignificant in this big old world
But I think I mean something to you
At least I hope that’s true.

The Ordinary Alligator
Terry Kennedy-Lares 2026

I’m just an ordinary alligator lyin’ on the bank,
watchin’ as the water flows by,
with my olive-grey suit and my long spiky tail,
alligator tears in my eyes
What’s this ol’ world comin’ to,
with alligators runnin’ the show,
preyin’ on the little folk swimmin’ up stream,
where did our harmony go?

I’m just an ordinary alligator livin’ in the swamp,
politics are on my side,
with a corrupt eco-system and my powerful tail,
I don’t have to hide.
What’s this ol’ world comin’ to,
when alligators own the swamp,
eattin’ up the resources stealin’ everything,
thinkin’ that life is just a romp.

I’m just an ordinary alligator……lyin’ on the bank
with my olive-grey suit and my long spiky tail,
alligator tears in my eyes

What’s that ol’ world comin’ to,
when alligators have control,
takin’ every thing from the little folk,
even stealing their soul.

What’s this ol’ world comin’ to,
when no one else can swim in the pond,
hoarding all the fish, stirring up the mud,
how can that be doing any harm.

VERSE 1
Her car a classic beauty and so was she
Like a fantasy girl with golden hair and a golden smile
She could have had her choice of lovers but she chose me
I spent the whole summer loving her mile after mile
CHORUS
She drove a ’57 Thunderbird
I was her only passenger
A ’57 Thunderbird
She ran us both through all the gears
Legendary automotive art
She had the roadmap to my heart
VERSE 2
It was a blazing hot summer in many ways
On a blanket at the beach or under starlit skies
The T-Bird kept humming both night and day
I didn’t know what was hiding behind her blue eyes
CHORUS
She drove a ’57 Thunderbird
I was her only passenger
A ’57 Thunderbird
She ran us both through all the gears
Legendary automotive art
She had the roadmap to my heart

REPEAT CHORUS

VERSE 3
We roared into August engine running hot
The highway ahead was looking free and clear
Thought at our final destination we might tie the knot
I didn’t know the end of the road was getting near
BRIDGE
September came the air grew colder
There was no tenderness when I’d hold her
A different lover would soon be by her side
She told me I’d taken my last ride
Everything I knew went up in smoke that day
No explanation she just drove away
CHORUS
In her ’57 Thunderbird
I was her only passenger
A ’57 Thunderbird
She ran us both through all the gears
Legendary automotive art
She had the roadmap to my heart

©2026 | Greg Beck Music | 320-266-2460

My Old Friend Jack (01/02/26 Revised)

(Intro)
I thought I heard you in the other room
It’s 3 AM and I remembered you’re not here
We’ve had so many fights, all over one thing
You told me to choose between you and my old friend Jack

(Verse 1)
I need to find a different buddy then the hooch
Because I loved you with all my heart
I promised to stop drinking and be a sober man
But…. I always get lured back by my old friend Jack

(Verse 2)
I remember that awful day we had another fight
And I was driving too fast
That sound of breaking glass haunts me to this day
Then…… the only one I had left was my old friend Jack

(Verse 3)
Day and night becomes a blur without you
Sometimes I think I’m doing fine alone
Then I see the picture of us on our wedding day
So,….. I have a long visit with my old friend Jack

(Verse 4)
I’m sick of always waking up with a spinning head
Every day I promise myself I’ll give up the booze
And most of that day I’m straight as an arrow
But memories of you flood my mind and I get a call from my old friend Jack

(Outro)
Promises are like maybes easy to say and easy to break
The love of my life is gone and I regret I didn’t listen to her
I found out life is a tough teacher
She gives the test first and the lesson later
That’s why I no longer listen to my old friend Jack
Good bye……….. my old friend Jack

(Copyright All Rights Reserved for William Fritz and James Fritz AKA Jimmy Fart Fingers 01/01/26)

Lyrics produced by William Fritz
SUNO AI produced the music and vocal

I wanted to write a song with a story and no rhyme.

I appreciate your comments

You Told Me So
(Samantha Casper 2026)

[VERSE ONE]
I picked another fight over nothing
Blew things way out of proportion
Yeah, I ruined another good day
That's what you would always say

Been so long walking on eggshells
I still feel them underneath
Now I say sorry just to say it
Before I even speak

[PRE-CHORUS]
Every tear was attention-seeking
Every fear was an overreaction

[CHORUS]
You wanna know how I know?
’Cause you told me so

[VERSE TWO]
I replay every conversation
Second-guess my every word
I hear your voice before my own
Like it's the only truth I've heard

Every mistake makes me want to hide
Every doubt still wears your face
And I hate how much I need to hear
You were wrong in the first place

[PRE-CHORUS]
Every question was proof of guilt
Every boundary was a reason for shame
And after hearing it long enough, I started thinking the same

[CHORUS]
You want to know how I know?
'Cause you told me so

[BRIDGE]
I can't get your voice out of my head
It's louder than the truth instead
And I hate that part of me
Still believes it's all on me
You don't have to hurt me now
I do it to myself somehow

[FINAL CHORUS]
You want to know how I know?
'Cause you told me so

Told me I ruin everything
Make a mountain out of anything
Now every little thing that goes wrong
I hear your judgments all day long
You want to know why I hate myself?
Why I wish I could be anybody else?
'Cause you said nobody would ever want me
That's what I learned to believe

Said I was – too much
Not enough
Too sensitive
Too hard to love

Now every mirror echoes back
Every lie dressed up as fact
You want to know why I feel this low?
'Cause you told me so

And even though you’re long gone now
I still can’t shut you out
Some lies leave scars that won't let go – I know
'Cause you told me so

I know it needs a lot of work. I meant for it to somehow show the build up and unraveling that happens when someone spends their entire life being talked down to. This is actually the dialed back version. I only recorded/uploaded the verses, 2-lined chorus/hook, and the bridge… I wasn't sure what to expect for the final bit of of.

4,000 WEEKS
By Paul Nye

VERSE 1:
My first job at Burger King lasted only two weeks
I was a flash in a pan on their grill
Ha, it’s just like life – here today and then gone
From the day we’re born it’s all downhill

CHORUS:
I’m insignificant, in this world
Got about 4,000 weeks ‘til I wear a suit of sod
Insignificant, don’t take life too seriously, oh no
My time on earth is like a wink and a nod
This ain’t my real home, I’m a child loved & owned by God, oh yeah
Owned by God

VERSE 2:
My job at Burger King didn’t turn out like I planned
A short order got me cooked & fried
But Jesus, my King – saved my soul
For that he got crucified

CHORUS:
I’m insignificant, in this world
Got about 4,000 weeks ‘til I wear a suit of sod
Insignificant, don’t take life too seriously, oh no
My time on earth is like a wink and a nod
This ain’t my real home, I’m a child loved by God

BRIDGE:
It was Jesus boss who put him on the cross
The life he gave was the life he lost

END CHORUS:
I am significant to him
Now I’m closer to the Son, yes I am
I’m significant to him, I’m a child of God, yes I am
My life on earth is almost done
Someday soon, I’m gonna meet the significant One
Yes I am. That makes me significant
I’m significant to God. Significant

BACKGROUND: This song explores the tension between human insignificance and divine significance through self-deprecating humor, ordinary working-class imagery, and the realization that while we may feel small in the world’s eyes, we are deeply significant to God.

Musically, the production leans into a very organic “human rhythm” approach — all percussion and drum sounds were created entirely with mouth and body percussion, and vocal sounds rather than traditional drums, giving the track an intimate rhythmic texture inspired partly by Michael Jackson-style vocal groove elements. The song begins with existential humor before gradually pivoting toward identity, redemption, and belonging.

Let’s Make It Up As We Go Along May 2026

Key of E flat

I get the feeling we’ve been trying too hard
Thinkin’ too much, talkin’ too loud./ I’m
getting’ tired of this same old song.
Let’s make it up as we go along

I like to think that we could reach for the stars
come back to earth from Venus and Mars/ and
do what it takes for whatever goes wrong
and make it up as we go along,

chorus:

It ain’t over yet/ but it’s
comin’ on strong/ an’
if I had to bet we could still get along./ There’s a
whole lot of truth that’s
hard to deny/ and e-
-nough to keep us talkin’ well into the night

instrumental verse:

Let’as talk it over with a bottle of wine.
Maybe get two, get sloppy and blind/and
misbehave as if nothing is wrong/ an’
make it up as we go along
make it up as we go along
make it up as we go along

Went to the Schooner Tavern a couple weeks ago. A sax player was doing a fabulous! solo. I thought to myself “he’s making it up as he goes along”. I had to write that thought down!
This is just the bare bones of the song that I haven’t even learned yet. Still subject to refinement.

Loneliness is Calling
(chorus)
Loneliness is calling
Loneliness is calling you
Don’t know what you’re gonna do
Loneliness is calling
Calling like a troubled friend
Like a hunger that’s gnawing
You don’t know when it’s gonna end
(verse)
You drive out of the city on a holiday
Get a place beside the ocean, relax in the waves
Got to get away from responsibility
Still walking with a weight that brings you to your knees
(Pre-chorus)
Standing in the shadows of all you’ve got
All you earned and all you’ve bought
Running out of space , running out of time
Did they tell it would be like this at the end of the line
(chorus)
Loneliness is calling
Loneliness is calling you
Don’t know what you’re gonna do
Loneliness is calling
Calling like a troubled friend
Like a hunger that’s gnawing
You don’t know when it’s gonna end
(Bridge)
Long ago and far away
Life didn’t have these shades of gray
The sky was blue, the future was calling you
(verse)
I woke up this morning the sun was overhead
Looked out the bedroom window and remembered what you said
That you’d call when you get there if you made it all the way
But the phone is silent and there’s nothing left to say
(chorus)
Loneliness is calling
Loneliness is calling you
Don’t know what you’re gonna do
Loneliness is calling
Calling like a troubled friend
Like a hunger that’s gnawing
You don’t know when it’s gonna end

Words and music by Michael Robinson. Recorded in Suno

Wanted to write a non-rhyming song

Previously sent through the email from SAS … Wednesday and then an updated melody on Friday.

Fly Little Birdie
© Sheryl Bohlander May 2026

VERSE 1
Wings once broken, now set free.
Pain once felt now released.
Earthly wounds that held you down
Now are nowhere to be found.

CHORUS
Fly Little Birdie, you’re free to roam
And sing out loud, I’m Home Sweet Home.
Fly Little Birdie, to Angels’ arms
There’s no one now who can do you harm.

VERSE 2
Born with limits few have faced
You lived a life with strength and grace
And freely loved with an open heart,
Despite your struggles right from the start.

CHORUS
Fly Little Birdie, you’re free to roam
And sing out loud, I’m Home Sweet Home.
Fly Little Birdie, to Angels’ arms
There’s no one now who can do you harm.

BRIDGE
Free from burdens, free from pain
It’s just my tears that now remain.
I love you now as I loved you then
And wait for the day we’re together again.

CHORUS
Fly Little Birdie, you’re free to roam
And sing out loud, I’m Home Sweet Home.
Fly Little Birdie, to Angels’ arms
There’s no one now who can do you harm.

Fly.
Fly.
Fly, Little Birdie. You are free.

This song is a tribute to my nephew, Derek, who was born with a cognitive deficiency, was abused by a step-father, struggled in many ways, but always wanted to travel, but most of all he wanted his own place to call home … his favorite song was Home Sweet Home by the Motley Cru. He worked at a high end hotel in the housekeeping department where he was loved and appreciated. He started having pain, the doctor thought he was after drugs (based on skinny, long-haired look, I suppose) and refused an MRI. After his pain became debilitating, an MRI was done and showed a rare “pan coast tumor” … stage 4 lung cancer. Despite an aggressive treatment plan, his body couldn’t take it and he passed away. His whole life was a struggle. Little Birdie is the nickname his sister gave to him and the title is based on a tribute my niece wrote and I read at his funeral. The lyrics and melody are “human created” by me … enhanced by SUNO.

DEMONS RUN FASTER THAN RAINBOWS

[Verse 1]
Don't get inside my head it's a damn dark scary place
My soul runs on half empty, it's not a sunny safe space
Rainbows and angels quit visiting my shoulder long ago
I'm sure they place bets, that I'll end up down below.

[Chorus]
Demons run faster than rainbows
The race is close, often nose to nose
Depression and demons, punch low blows
Demons run faster than rainbows
Demons run faster than rainbows

[Verse 2]
My heart shines of darkness, illuminating my senseless life
Friends abandon me, just ask my ex-wife
Demons chase my soul, life's a tormented living death
Angels don't hear my cry, cause they're stone-deaf

[Chorus]
Demons run faster than rainbows
The race is close, often nose to nose
Depression and demons, punch low blows
Demons run faster than rainbows
Demons run faster than rainbows

[Bridge]
I hope my heart and soul is not completely lost
I'm not ready to have my dreams of heaven tossed
I'll breath a new life, soothe my wounded soul
I hope I'm not double crossed.

[Chorus]
Demons run faster than rainbows
The race is close, often nose to nose
Depression and demons, punch low blows
Demons run faster than rainbows
Demons run faster than rainbows

Written in 2026 this song is darker than I usually write, but I believe the topic of depression is a worthy one. The lyrics and melody are 100% written by me. I created a song demo and used enhanced production tools for the vocals, instrumentation and production. Thanks for listening.

Verse 1
Crew cab with a three-inch lift kit
Flared fenders with rims sticking out a bit
Pearl white paint, windows with limo tint
His Chevy baby is perfectly mint

No matter what, here’s his deal
Nobody else is allowed behind the wheel
Not his friends, not his brother
He won’t even give the keys to his mother

Pre-chorus
I used to question where I stood
Compared to that 6.2 there under the hood
One day I knew for sure
My heart was secure

Chorus
Wasn’t when he brought me flowers
When we sat and talked for hours
Wasn’t when he gently held my hand
When he softly asked to be my man
When I knew it was true love
Was when he let me drive his truck

Verse 2
He smiles if I take the curve too fast
Or change the settings on the dash
He jokes the brake is the one next to the gas
If I speed a little so I can pass

Pre-chorus
I used to wonder who he’d choose
Me or the heated seats and adaptive cruise
But I knew how he felt
When he reached over, tightened my seat belt

Chorus
It wasn’t when he called me pretty
Or when my kiss made him dizzy
Wasn’t when I heard him sing along
To the lyrics of my favorite song
When I knew it was true love
Was when he let me drive his truck

Bridge
I’m not some shotgun princess
When I wanna drive his answers always yes

Chorus
It wasn’t when he met my folks
Or when he laughed at my dad’s terrible jokes
Wasn’t when he gave two rings to me
One a diamond, one an extra key
When I knew it was true love
Was when he let me drive his truck

Co-wrote with and performed by Janice Gilbert. This is the produced version.

Opposites Attract ©2026 Doug Millaway and Bob Wright

FIRST TIME, I COULDN'T READ YOUR VIBE, OR YOUR TYPE
ALL YOUR INSIDE JOKES, AND YOUR LATE NIGHT SMILES
BUT LITTLE BY LITTLE, YOU GOT THROUGH TO ME
AND THE LOOK IN YOUR EYES, CHANGED EVERYTHING

NO TWO PEOPLE
MOVE THE SAME
THAT'S OKAY
BUT SOMEHOW TONIGHT
WE GOT IT RIGHT
OPPOSITES ATTRACT

YOU LIKE SUNRISE, I LIKE MIDNIGHT
YOU STAY IN, I LIVE FOR NEON LIGHTS
BUT FROM OUR VERY FIRST KISS
I KNEW SOMETHING FELT LIKE THIS

NO TWO PEOPLE
MOVE THE SAME
THAT'S OKAY
BUT SOMEHOW TONIGHT
WE GOT IT RIGHT
OPPOSITES ATTRACT

LOVE CAN HIT YOU OUTTA NOWHERE
AND SUDDENLY, IT'S ALL RIGHT THERE

NO TWO PEOPLE
MOVE THE SAME
THAT'S OKAY
BUT SOMEHOW TONIGHT
WE GOT IT RIGHT
OPPOSITES ATTRACT

NO TWO PEOPLE
MOVE THE SAME
THAT'S OKAY
BUT SOMEHOW TONIGHT
WE GOT IT RIGHT
OPPOSITES ATTRA

A co-write with Bob Wright from the Sync Society.

AMERICAN MUSCLE © 2026 by John Bennett
(Pulsating, driving rock, pounding drums)

[Intro]
[Chorus]
AMERICAN MUSCLE
hear our engines roar
AMERICAN MUSCLE
gonna show you what it's for
Built for glory, born to run
Let freedom ride when the day is done
AMERICAN MUSCLE
let the whole world see
Raw horsepower and liberty

[Verse 1]
I still remember back in sixty five
A SS Chevy four Oh nine
steel awakens as you turn the key
A feeling that lives only in memory
You feel that thunder roar deep inside
Nothing compared to that sweet ride

[Chorus]
AMERICAN MUSCLE
hear our engines roar
AMERICAN MUSCLE
gonna show you what it's for
Built for glory, born to run
Let freedom ride when the day is done
AMERICAN MUSCLE
let the whole world see
Raw horsepower and liberty

[Verse 2]
Chasing freedom, throttle open wide
like Steve McQueen in a bullet ride
blacktop stretches at the edge of town
Fast and furious, no slowing down
Drop the hammer, pop that clutch
Foot to the floor feel the rush of

[Chorus]
AMERICAN MUSCLE
You’re gonna hear our engines roar
AMERICAN MUSCLE
gonna show you what it's for
Built for glory, born to run
Let freedom ride when the day is done
AMERICAN MUSCLE
let the whole world see
Raw horsepower and liberty

[Break]

[Bridge]
Living fast with American pride
Red, white, blue it’s time to ride
if it’s our speed you want to test
Then it’s time to flex….some

[Chorus]
AMERICAN MUSCLE
hear our engines roar
AMERICAN MUSCLE
gonna show you what it's for
Built for glory, born to run
Let freedom ride when the day is done
AMERICAN MUSCLE
let the whole world see
Raw horsepower and liberty

[Outro]

[Sustain last note]

[End]

The Witch
Terry Kennedy-Lares 2026

Chorus:
I am the witch, born to joy and sorrow
I am the witch, informed by yesterday
I am the witch, seeing to tomorrow,
I am the witch, living in today.

I am the witch, Rhiannon’s blessed heir,
truth is in my story, bird songs fill the air.
I am the witch, Cerridwen’s honored child,
born to stir the cauldron, spill the magic wild.

Chorus

I am the witch, Bridget’s shinning one,
welcoming the Springtime, with Imbolc’s warming sun
I am the witch, the child of Aengus Og,
spreading love and kisses, while singing my song

Bridge: The sun, moon, and stars, spiral through the sky
Seasons pass over the Earth,
We watch the changes, the weather and the tides,
The Goddess leads us to rebirth.

I am the witch, the face of Morrigan,
Life and Death surround me, as through this world I run,
I am the witch, Cernunnos of the wild,
Father of the forest, has my soul beguiled.

Still working on it, mixing is rough.

Good Days are Gone
(chorus)
When the good days are gone
When the good days are gone
When it's time to go home and you go home alone
The good days are gone
(Verse)
When the people you thought were your friends
Turn out to be means to an end
When all the allies you had on your side
Turn out to be spies for the other side
(chorus)
When the good days are gone
When the good days are gone
When it's time to go home and you go home alone
The good days are gone
(bridge)
Remember the time remember the faces
Remember the days of mystery
The fourth of July the twelfth of december
Memories now of what once was to be
(verse)
She walked in the sun on that golden beach
So close it seemed but just out of reach
Has your confidence gone
Was it all just a lie
Do you trust what you see when you look in her eyes
It's so lonely to find at the end of the line
When the darkness arrives
And you've run out of time
(chorus)
When the good days are gone
When the good days are gone
When it's time to go home
And you go home alone
The good days are gone

Words and Music by Michael Robinson. Performed by Suno.

Sweet Memories
by Greg Beck

VERSE 1:
We had 30 years of friendship
Formed a strong unspoken bond
Though I know he’s gone forever
It still beckons from the beyond

VERSE 2:
I finally gave up asking why
For someone or something to blame
Trying to find some kind of reason
For things that can not be explained

CHORUS:
All the times I took for granted
Our life stories interlaced
Though I’ll never understand it
Sweet memories can’t be erased

VERSE 3:
I watch the sun rise in the eastern sky
Slowly disappear each night
Eagles fly babies cry
Like nothing’s changed all is right

VERSE 4:
Loss is something you can’t see
When time has healed the face of grief
It lingers right below the conscious mind
Then will attack you from beneath

CHORUS:
All the times I took for granted
Our life stories interlaced
Though I’ll never understand it
Sweet memories can’t be erased

©2026 | Greg Beck Music | gregb@mac.com | 320-266-2460

I just wrote this yesterday, recorded this version today (review day). I'll be rerecording the vocal. Open to suggestions on lyrics and phrasing, which I don't view as final.

Bill Fritz wrote the lyrics and Suno Ai produced the music and vocal with modern country western.

This is dedicated to all my gray-haired friends.

Country Singer Millionaire (Revision 01/20/25)

(Intro)
I’m a country singer millionaire
But I don’t have a dime to my name
Makes no difference, I don’t care
I’m the richest country singer just the same
(Chorus)
As long as I have:
My Medicare
My easy chair
My old gray hair
And were still a pair
(1st Verse)
Watching the Grand Old Opry on TV
I dream they have my name up in lights
I wake each morning to reality
But, your love always brings me to the heights
(Chorus)
As long as I have:
My Medicare
My easy chair
My old gray hair
And were still a pair

(2nd Verse)
The best part of my life is being with you
I’m a singing star because you care
And I know you’ll always be true
Life is great being a country singer millionaire
(Chorus)
As long as I have:
My Medicare
My easy chair
My old gray hair
And were still a pair
(Outro)
I’m a country singer millionaire
But I don’t have a dime to my name
Makes no difference, I don’t care
I’m the richest country singer just the same

(Copyright All Rights Reserved for William J. Fritz and Jimmy Fat Fingers 08/29/25)

(SUNO AI Produced the music and vocal)

Ragged Mess ©2020 Doug Millaway

You couldn't tell her anything she didn't already know
There were things she never wanted said out loud
The fog around a worried mind kept all her secrets in
Trust no one, keep your enemy around

What once was clear is now just a haze
One bad call takes its toll
The truth and the lies all come together
This ragged mess used to be a soul

The captain made a bad call down by the channel that night
Now the whole damn town is living with it still
The fog out on the water keeps the truth just out of sight
Nobody talks about it, but we will

What once was clear is now just a haze
One bad call takes its toll
The truth and the lies all come together
This ragged mess used to be a soul

The fog rolls in every evening like it's trying to help us forget
But the truth waits out on the water and it ain't done with you yet
You can hide it for a while, you can try to just move on,
but the tide comes in every morning like it knows what you've done

What once was clear is now just a haze
One bad call takes its toll
The truth and the lies all come together
This ragged mess used to be a soul

In a town like this, nothing really disappears

I've had this song in my "to do" list since the pandemic. I think the lyrics set a strong mood, but the story may be too cryptic. Looking for possible fixes.

GOOD MORNING BLUEBIRD

Bluebird grace me with your song
Tidings of hope and spirit you pass along
Peace, good luck and a joy filled day
Keep me straight, never let me stray

Good morning bluebird
Please don’t fly away
What news have you heard
Good fortune I pray
Promise me a cheerful word
Good morning, good morning bluebird

Your magical tune is folklore spun
You are the dawn and the rising sun
Your song tweets a spiritual feel
You idle winter and spring blooms you reveal

Good morning bluebird
Please don’t fly away
What news have you heard
Good fortune I pray
Promise me a cheerful word
Good morning, good morning bluebird

Sometimes I'm lonely, maybe feeling blue
I open my heart, and shout wahoo
Your bluebird is sacred, just ask the Sioux
I follow his song, and know just what to do

Good morning bluebird
Please don' fly away
What news have you heard
Good fortune I pray
Promise me a cheerful word
Good morning,good morning bluebird
Good morning, good morning bluebird

Wrote this song in 2026. I created song demo from 100% human written melody and lyrics. i used enhanced production tools for a more professional polish on production, instruments and vocals. The melody for the verses I have played for five years on my guitar, finally the lyrics came to match melody. Thanks for listening.

What I Missed
By Paul Nye nyesguyTunes Publ/BMI (Jason Mraz vibe)
VERSE 1:
I used to think Jesus was a homeless drifter, wore dirty clothes
He loved and hung around people religious leaders loathed
Probably had bad breath, maybe body odor
Didn’t have a place, musta been a freeloader

PRE-CHORUS:
I didn’t believe because it made no sense – never considered the evidence

CHORUS:
Nothing from nothing was what I believed
That was my narrow philosophy
There were things in life that I accepted by faith
‘Cept for that One who tooka my place
Faith in God I easily dismissed
But now I see what I missed , oh-oh, what did I miss?

VERSE 2:
A big threat to the gov’rnment when he said he was a king
They didn’t know what he meant, and that was not a good thing
He caused a big stir with what he did and said
Like healing the sick & blind, & raising the dead

PRE-CHORUS:

Yeah, I was a big resist-ah, Now I wonder what I missed-ah

CHORUS:
Nothing from nothing was what I believed
That was my narrow philosophy
There were things in life that I accepted by faith
‘Cept for that One who tooka my place
Faith in God I easily dismissed
But now I see what I missed , oh-oh, what I missed?

BRIDGE:
Absolute truth was not in my worldview
And I believed that was absolutely true
But I had a lot of faith in things I could not see
Like history, wind & air, & gravity

CHORUS:
Nothing from nothing was what I believed
That was my narrow philosophy
There were things in life that I accepted by faith
‘Cept for that One who tooka my place
Faith in God I easily dismissed
Now I can see what I missed , oh-oh, what did I miss?

My feeble attempt at channeling Jason Mraz musically, but mostly lyrically. Don't recall if I've submitted this for a review in the past. Main issue is the song borders on thoughtful/intellectual/philosophical POV with novelty language thrown in. I wonder if that cheapens the song, or if I should stick with less "slang" language. Also, a few lines in the verses "tell" more than "show." I would like to know which lines I should focus on. Finally, I understand that the language in the first verse can turn some listeners off. I wanted to be blunt with how I used to see Jesus – or how many unbelievers might see Jesus, but I wonder if it's too blunt. I worked hard at not being preachy in this song. Hopefully, that came across.

THEY SAY A GOOD MAN IS HARD TO FIND. SHERYL BOHLANDER OCTOBER 2025
Updated December 11, 2025

VERSE ONE
They say a good man is hard to find,
I say it’s how you spend your time.
Don’t put your hope in fairytales
‘Cause wishin’ & hopin’ always fails.

PRE-CHORUS
Call me sentimental,
A little old-fashioned too.
And don’t forget you’re a smart girl
In love you need some rule rules

CHORUS
Know me before you want me.
Respect me before you kiss me.
Love me, but don’t lie to me.
Use me and you’ll lose me.

VERSE TWO
You gotta know yourself & what you want
Don’t waste your time just to tease &
Taunt.
Don’t hide yourself with a fancy mask
If you want your love to last.

VERSE THREE
When you find you’ve been mesmerized
Just remember not to compromise
Stay true to yourself and you will see
True love will set you free

PRE-CHORUS
Call me sentimental,
A little old-fashioned too.
And don’t forget you’re a smart girl
In love you need some rule rules

CHORUS
Know me before you want me.
Respect me before you kiss me.
Love me, but don’t lie to me.
Use me and you’ll lose me.

VERSE FOUR
Well, mama was right grandma too.
These were the things they told me to do.
To find true love, you’ve got to be choosy.
Don’t spend your life with a lousy doozy.

VERSE FIVE
Find a man who treats you right
You’ll never have a lonely night
A woman’s instinct is rarely wrong
So just listen to your soul’s song

PRE-CHORUS
Call me sentimental,
A little old-fashioned too.
And don’t forget you’re a smart girl
In love you need some rule rules

CHORUS
Know me before you want me.
Respect me before you kiss me.
Love me, but don’t lie to me.
Use me and you’ll lose me.

PRE-CHORUS
Call me sentimental
A little old-fashioned too
But don’t forget you’re a smart girl
And I love you need some rules

CHORUS
Know me before you want me
Respect me before you kiss me
Love me, but don’t lie to me
Use me and you’ll lose me

CHORUS
Know me before you want me
Respect me before you kiss me
Love me, but don’t lie to me
Use me and you’ll lose me

OUTRO
Use me and you’ll lose me

I wrote the lyrics to this song last year and have been working on the melody – not totally happy with it yet. I uploaded to SUNO what I had finished, but to be clear, the melody is more than 'enhanced' with SUNO at this point … I could use some suggestions.

Shot Down in Minnesota
[Verse 1]
They came to Minnesota
Told to meet a quota
counting human souls
numbers on a roll

Prowling through the neighborhood
Killed Alex Pretti and Renee Good
She just tried to drive away
He helped someone up that day

(Chorus)
Families taken from their homes
Kis crying and alone
Two that stood up brave and strong
Shot down in Minnesota

[Verse 2]
Let me see your papers
Were you waiting to be found?
Helpless and surrounded
Do your neighbors hear the sound
Of jackboots on the ground?

(Chorus)
Families taken from their homes
Kids crying and alone
Two that stood up brave and strong
Shot down in Minnesota

Fear creeps into every school
They were taught to follow rules
That don’t apply to everyone
Tear gas, hand cuffs masks and guns
Pointed at the people of Minnesota

[Bridge)
Will this end in my lifetime?
Can you give me a lifeline?
Please take them away
From Minnesota
Please take them away
From Minnesota

(Chorus)
Families taken from their homes
Kids crying and alone
Two that stood up brave and strong
Shot down in Minnesota

Can this really happen here
Damn this hateful atmosphere
Descending on the state of Minnesota
Please take them away from Minnesota

(Chorus)
Families taken from their homes
Kids crying and alone
Two that stood up brave and strong
Shot down in Minnesota
Shot down in Minnesota

Shot Down in Minnesota
[Verse 1]
They came to Minnesota
Told to meet a quota
counting human souls
numbers on a roll

Prowling in an unmarked fleet
Shot protesters in the streets
She just tried to drive away
He helped someone up that day

(Chorus)
Families taken from their homes
Children crying and alone
Two that stood up brave and strong
Shot down in Minnesota

[Verse 2]
Let me see your papers
Were you waiting to be found?
Helpless and surrounded
Do your neighbors hear the sound
Of jackboots on the ground?

(Chorus)
Families taken from their homes
Children crying and alone
Two that stood up brave and strong
Shot down in Minnesota

Fear creeps into every school
They were taught to follow rules
That don’t apply to everyone
Tear gas, hand cuffs masks and guns
Pointed at the people of Minnesota

[Bridge)
Will this end in my lifetime?
Can you offer me a lifeline?
Please take them away
From Minnesota
Please take them away
From Minnesota

(Chorus)
Families taken from their homes
Children crying and alone
Two that stood up brave and strong
Shot down in Minnesota

Can this really happen here
Damn this hateful atmosphere
Descending on the state of Minnesota
Please take them away from Minnesota

(Chorus)
Families taken from their homes
Children crying and alone
Two that stood up brave and strong
Shot down in Minnesota
Shot down in Minnesota

[VERSE ONE]
We used to celebrate together
One day apart, but side by side
Same candles, hours of laughter
Always you and I
Now I’m sitting here in silence
I don’t know what to do
I just want you

[PRE-CHORUS]
I look for little signs
In the places you used to be

[CHORUS]
Flutter by, Butterfly
If you’re in the way the air feels changed
Stay here by my side

[VERSE TWO]
I know angels don’t get older
But I still count the years
Still saying “happy birthday.”
Through a throat full of tears
I still talk to you sometimes
Like I always used to do
’Cause I wasn’t ready to say goodbye
And I still need you

[PRE-CHORUS]
I look for little signs
Anything to cue a memory

[CHORUS]
Flutter by, Butterfly
If you’re right here and I can’t explain it
Stay here by my side

[BRIDGE]
If you’re in the breeze that’s blowing
If you’re in the petals falling
If you’re in the stars up in the sky
Wherever you are in Heaven
Flutter by, butterfly
Send me back your sunshine

[FINAL CHORUS]
Flutter by, Butterfly
I still whisper your name
If you’re somewhere close tonight
If you wouldn’t mind
Stay here by my side

[OUTRO]
One day apart – I still feel it
Every year – I still whisper your sweet name
Flutter by, butterfly – I still miss, still love you
That will never change

For a little context behind this one:
– My grandma and I were extremely close. We celebrated our birthdays together every year, and she loved (and collected) anything with butterflies.
– “You Are My Sunshine” was the first song she taught me to play on the piano when I was little, and it was always something special between us.
– When my daughter was little, she couldn’t say “butterfly,” so she called them “flutterbies.”
– “Flutter by, Butterfly” is the name of the poem I wrote for my grandma’s funeral.
– Whenever we see a monarch butterfly, we like to think it’s her visiting us.

Verse 1
Twelve-year-old me
Standing on the stage
About to sing a solo
Hands sweating, shaking, and afraid

I searched the audience
For a friendly face
I only saw strangers
My heart beating hard, about to break

Pre-Chorus
Everyone else was grinning
At loving parents cheering
The only applause I craved
Was the one you never gave

Chorus
I always saved you a seat
Praying you’d show up for me
Trying to convince myself you cared
But you were never there
Where you were supposed to be
Was just an empty chair

Verse 2
Twenty-five-year-old me
Standing at the altar
About to say I do
There’s one boutonnière with no wearer

I hoped maybe just once
When I looked around
I would find your face
Crying and smiling among the crowd

Chorus
I always saved you a seat
Praying you’d show up for me
Trying to convince myself you cared
But you were never there
Where you were supposed to be
Was just an empty chair

Bridge
Never there when I needed you
Never your presence, just an excuse
When I’m a dad, I’ll know just what to do

Chorus
My kids will save me a seat
And I’ll be there without a prayer
They’ll never scan the crowd for me
They’ll hear the applause they need
I’ll always be there
Never an empty chair
No more empty chairs

WHERE YOU ARE
By Paul Nye
VERSE 1:
I keep picking at this scab of emotion
And I know it’ll leave a scar
But that scar will be a living reminder
Of who I am, and where you are
PRE-CHORUS:
This bed is cold without you
‘Cause it’s not where you are
CHORUS:
I miss that warm empty spot where your body once lay
I still hold you in my heart
We were so close, Heaven’s not that far
But I take comfort knowing there you are
Yeah, I take comfort knowing where you are
VERSE 2:
We built a good life together
Two kids, scattered toys across the floor
Yeah, the best thing about us wasn’t what we owned
Your love made it feel like more
PRE-CHORUS:
This bed is cold without you
‘Cause it’s not where you are
CHORUS:
I miss that warm empty spot where your body once lay
I still hold you in my heart
We were so close, and Heaven’s not that far
But, I take comfort knowing there you are
Yeah, I take comfort knowing where you are
BRIDGE:
My tears soak the ground on this grassy field
Of names and dates etched in stone
Somewhere beyond this field of grief
We’ll never be alone
Still I’d love to walk you halfway home
END CHORUS:
I miss that warm empty spot where your body once lay
I will always hold you in my heart
We were so close, Heaven’s not so far
But I take comfort in knowing there you are
I miss that warm empty spot where your body once lay
I will always hold you in my heart
We were close, Heaven’s not so far
But I take comfort in knowing there you are
Yeah, I take comfort in knowing where you are
There you are….

“WHERE YOU ARE” © By Paul Nye
nyesguyTunes Publishing/BMI * paulenye@me.com

A song about grief and loss. I was thinking about how grief doesn’t always come in big waves – it comes in those quiet moments after losing someone, when it’s not the big things that hit you—it’s the small, everyday ones. The empty side of the bed, the life you built together, the memories that don’t quite fade. It’s a song about missing someone deeply, but also holding onto the comfort that they’re still close in a different way.
PRODUCTION NOTES: I also have a stripped down acoustic version of the song. I like this one better. The outro has its own metaphor to fit the lyrical content. For some, it might not be evident. That said, it can easily be edited out due to the length of the song.

We Still Say I Do © 2026 Doug Millaway
The sirens started early
Before the morning news
Another town is burning
Another line to choose
But the coffee’s on the counter
And the sunlight fills the room
Down the quiet hallway
Someone whispers, “I love you”

We still say I do
Even when the sky turns black and blue
When everything else feels untrue (ooh, ooh, ooh, ooh)
Somehow we still say I do (ooh, ooh, ooh, pph)

We still say I do (it's true)
We still say I do (you know it's true)
We still say I do (yes, it's true)
I do

The headlines keep on shouting
About the borders we cross
But no one writes the stories
Of the quiet things we lost
Little acts of courage
Are what we’re living on
A hand across the table
A kiss before the dawn

Maybe love’s the last light
Still burning in the dark
A stubborn little heartbeat
Inside a broken heart

We still say I do
Even when the sky turns black and blue
When everything else feels untrue (ooh, ooh, ooh, ooh)
Somehow we still say I do (ooh, ooh, ooh, pph)

We still say I do (it's true)
We still say I do (you know it's true)
We still say I do (yes, it's true)
I do

It's true
You know it's true
Yes, it's true
I do

We still say I do (it's true)
We still say I do (oh you know it's true)
We still say I do (it's true)
I do

This song is about the fact that despite a war going on, people still fall in love amidst the chaos.

The Protester’s Song
Terry Kennedy-Lares -copyright 2026

Spoken: Sitting on the couch watching the news is driving me crazy. It seems like everything
is falling apart. What’s going to happen next? I know that I just have to do something.

Standing in the cold, feeling pretty old, a sign is in my hands,
Trying to catch their eyes as people drive by, hoping they understand.
A six year old son, lost his mother to a gun, shot down dead and cold,
People don’t care, they sit and stare at their favorite TV shows,

Chorus:
America you broke my heart,
you promised me a dream but you lied to me,
America you broke my heart,
Where is that land of life and liberty?

Standing in the rain, feeling all the pain of the people in our land,
Been here before, stepping through the door, I have to take a stand,
Trying to melt the ICE, with Minnesota nice, will not change a thing,
Gotta take a stand, for our Country and our land, and let our freedom ring,

Chorus;
Bridge:
We’re living in a fascist nightmare, We’re living in a broken land,
We’re living in a fascist nightmare, We’re living in a broken land.

Chorus x 2

Just started mixing this, not as yet mastered, written basically for those who are out there on the frontlines protesting.

Song Title: Love Ain’t Maybe, It’s Yes or No
Writer: James M. Fritz
Date Written: April 2023

Verse1

My baby, she got me twisted
And I don’t know which way to go
She says love is maybe
Never ever, yes or no

Chorus

Yes or no, I got to know
Yes or no, stay or go
Got to lay it all out lady
Love ain’t maybe,
It’s yes or no

Verse 2

When I search your mystic eyes
Oh women, oh my baby
My heart leaps and it cries
Your love I know, will grow

Chorus (repeat)

Yes or no, I got to know
Yes or no, stay or go
Got to lay it all out lady
Love ain’t maybe
It’s yes or no

Instrumental
(no-lyrics)

Verse 3

So, what will happen next
Only time can truly tell
Will we stay together
Or kiss our last farewell

Chorus (repeat)

Yes or no, I got to know
Yes or no, stay or go
Gotta lay it all out lady
Love ain’t maybe
It’s yes or no

Chorus (repeat)
,
Yes or no, I got to know
Yes or no, stay or go
Gotta lay it all out lady
Love ain’t maybe
It’s yes or no

Song was written in 2023. I recently made some changes and produced it thru Suno Ai using my Song Demo and Lyrics. Suno was instructed to follow melody, lyrics, tempo chord structure , guitar riffs exactly. I hope you like it!

A Song I Sing in the Darkness

Standing at the window
Staring down the road
Grieving how the years have come and gone
Turning to the future
Trusting it gets better
Pouring all my pain into a song

A song I sing in the darkness
As tears keep falling from my eyes
In a world that seems so heartless
And I can't understand why

I gaze beyond the shadows
Toward the coming dawn
Though I can't see it yet, I know it's near
So I keep looking forward
I know a day will come
When morning fills the world with love to share

I'll sing my song in the darkness
As tears keep falling from my eyes
In a world that seems so heartless
And I can't understand why

I need to leave my lonely window
And seek out hearts that care like mine
It's better not to stay in limbo
But rather let my loving light shine

As I keep singing in the darkness
And tears keep falling from my eyes
Although the world still   seems heartless
I'll sing my song to help the world rise
Yes, I'll sing my song to help the world rise.av

Copyright 2026 Vicki Morrison Goble | ASCAP

This was my submission for the 6th prompt (the picture prompt) in the Facebook Singer-Songwriter Songwriting Challenge this winter. I wrote the words and melody and used Suno to generate stems for me to sing with. So it's my voice, too.

WE ARE LIGHT
These thoughts, come and go, we try to control
Don’t fight so hard, this will pass
They’re just thoughts, they won’t last

Don’t beat yourself, for what you think of
For being human, it’s not your fault
Don’t hold on, tell a friend
How you feel, don’t pretend
It’s madness to think we can
Together we are strong, together we are strong.

We need help to navigate this world to,
Manage the unknown you know we’re bound to go through
We need help to steer away from dark rooms,
To focus on the good news, we can’t see alone
It’s madness to think we can
Together we are strong, together we are strong

I am not my thoughts, I’m not this world, I’m not this place
I am not my thoughts, I’m not my past, I’m not my pain
We are light, we are love, we are freedom
We are light, we are love, we are freedom

I am not my thoughts, I’m not this world, I’m not this place
I am not my thoughts, I’m not my past, I’m not my pain
We are light, we are love, we are freedom
We are light, we are love, we are freedom
We are light, we are love, we are freedom

Its not verse/chorus. I think its A/B but then I really don't know what that is. Lol. Or if it works at all. I'll play it live and would appreciate any reactions, suggestions. I can't even get a sense of it anymore. Thx :)

WAITING
Verse 1
I’ve been working in a restaurant since I can remember
It was never something that I wanted, it’s just what I do, it’s just what I do

Waiting tables serving French cuisine, I imagine the Eiffel Tower
I’m living in a field of dreams, my own field of flowers

CHORUS
TO SURVIVE I’VE DONE SOME THINGS I’M NOT THAT PROUD OF
TO STAY ALIVE I’VE SACRIFICED WHAT MY HEART SCREAMS OUT OF MY DREAMS
CUZ I WAS AFRAID

Verse 2
Enchiladas and taco supreme, too many margarita nights swallowed up my dreams
Pizza, pasta, midnight moon beams, Ciao Bella

But it’s been good to me, I’ve made a living since I left home at 17
I stay within my means, I go on and on and on waiting
CHORUS
BRIDGE
You signaled me for water, where’s my milk? I’ll bring the cow
Anticipate your every need and keep on smiling
I wanted to do big things, I decided it’s a big thing,
Whatever work I do, to do it kindly
CHORUS, outro

this is the right one…..wondering about the bridge….if its even necessary…..I wanted to use it for clarification and a break out….could be totally duh

Dear Depression (2024/2026)

[VERSE ONE]
Tumbled down like a fallen stone
Carried shadows that chilled the bone
A broken voice screaming but silent
A troubled mind with thoughts so violent

Darkness pressed down on my chest
Sleepless nights stole what was left
I can’t remember who I am
Feeling weak – I can barely stand

[PRE-CHORUS ONE]
And my whole life
Isn’t what I thought it’d be
It’s all fallen apart
Mmm, I’ve fallen apart

[CHORUS]
Oh, Dear Depression
What have you got for me today?
I was hoping to feel okay
For a change
‘Cause Dear Depression
I’m worn out (x3)

[VERSE TWO]
Isolating – feeling lonely
Painful memories that haunt me
A ghost stuck in my own routine
Failing to grasp reality

Replaying speeches I can’t unsay
Fighting to find the will to live each day
I’m scared this is all I know
I’m scared to be alone

[PRE-CHORUS TWO]
And my whole life
Doesn’t seem to mean a thing
It’s all fallen apart
Mmm, I’ve fallen apart

[CHORUS]
Oh, Dear Depression
What have you got for me today?
I was hoping to feel okay
For a change
‘Cause Dear Depression
I’m worn out (x3)

[BRIDGE]
Scars etched too deep to fade
Visual reminders of thoughts engraved
Any peace I had been searching for
Has been locked in a bureau drawer
‘Cause I don’t deserve it
No, I don’t deserve it
Oh, I don’t deserve it
I'm not worth it

[PRE-CHORUS THREE]
And my whole life
Isn’t worth a single thing
It’s all fallen apart
Mmm, I’ve fallen apart

[CHORUS]
Oh, Dear Depression
What have you got for me today?
I was hoping to feel okay
For a change
‘Cause Dear Depression
I’m worn out (x3)

AI composition created from an a capella recording of my melody, and redone – over and over again.

THE LONG RIDE
By Paul Nye

VERSE 1:
These days, I’ve been saying good-bye
To the past I’ve held onto most of my life
And I know I won’t miss what has dragged me down
But I hold onto friends who stuck around

CHORUS:
People come and go, but close friends we hold dear
The ones who were there through our triumphs & tears
Life is a journey – a map that fades with time
But true friends stay for the long ride

VERSE 2:
Growing up wasn’t easy – with the cards I was dealt
Every pothole I hit, took me back to what I felt
And those potholes left scars that faded with time
But I’ve learned how to leave that hurt behind

CHORUS:
People come and go, but close friends we hold dear
The ones who are there through our triumphs & tears
Life is a journey – a map that fades with time
But true friends stay for the long ride

BRIDGE:
I left home with the keys to a beat-up old car
With a trunk full of memories I’ve had so far
Now my body’s an old engine that’s carried me through
Past the wreckages of life and people I knew

VERSE 3:
Life isn’t a license to a right we hold
It’s a gift we’re given- not bought or sold
There’s no guarantee every road will be smooth
Just the promise God is there whatever road we choose

END CHORUS/TAG:
Life is a journey – a map that fades with time
But true friends stay for the long ride
Stay for the ride, Stay for the Long Ride

“THE LONG RIDE” © By Paul Nye
nyesguyTunes Publishing/BMI * paulenye@me.com

[VERSE 1]
I was young naive and on a mission
A writer of songs with lofty ambitions
Thought you measured worth in money and fame
My goal was for the world to know my name

[VERSE 2]
Left for Music City with a bag and a 6-string
Found a music bar where I could play and sing
Thought I’d stand out in the Nashville scene
But I was one of a thousand chasing that dream

[PRE-CHORUS]
Now I don’t think about stardom
Playing on the big stage
Give me a room with listeners I can engage

[CHORUS]
I just want to be heard
The message is what matters not the size of the house
Want them to understand what each song is about
I just want to be heard
I just want to be heard

[VERSE 3]
I don’t listen to the so-called experts
Who say I need songs with catchy hooks
The kind you can’t get out of your head
I give them something to think about instead

[PRE-CHORUS]
Don’t want to be like all the rest
Not trying to be the best
Not a poet or a profit but there is much I need to say

[CHORUS]
I just want to be heard
The message is what matters not the size of the house
Want them to understand what each song is about
I just want to be heard
I just want to be heard

[BRIDGE]
There is so much satisfaction
In seeing people’s reactions
As they connect with the thoughts that I express
That’s my definition of success

[CHORUS]
I just want to be heard
The message is what matters not the size of the house
Want them to understand what each song is about
I just want to be heard
I just want to be heard

I'm on a little vacation from winter, no access to my studio gear, so not able to produce this myself. I recorded a crude demo on my laptop and uploaded it to Suno, which made this cover version of my demo. It followed the original melody very closely.

Verse 1
I remember when we met, for me it was love at first sight
You said with just a little work I could be your Miss Right
You started changing me from my job to the way I dress
At first I still loved you because I thought you knew best
You were never happy no matter how hard I tried
You pointed out all my flaws, laughing when I cried

Chorus
Now I know you’ll never be the man I thought you would be
So I'm setting myself free
You turned my love story into a tragedy
Now I can clearly see
I can't fix you, but I can still fix me

Verse 2
I'm done listening to you scold me like a child
Because you don't like my shoes or how my hair is styled
I'm done holding onto you to make myself feel whole
Trying to get back the self-esteem you stole
I'm done hoping, praying, and wishing
You’d see what you were ruinin’

Chorus
Now I know you’ll never be the man I thought you would be
So I'm setting myself free
You turned my love story into a tragedy
Now I can clearly see
I can't fix you, but I can still fix me

Bridge
It's time for my needs to finally be heard
So for once I’m putting myself first
You caused me so much pain I didn't deserve
I need some better ‘cause I’ve had enough worse

Chorus
Now I know you’ll never be the man I thought you would be
So I'm setting myself free
You turned my love story into a tragedy
Now I can clearly see
I can't fix you, but I can still fix me
I can still fix me
Still fix me

SHORTCUT THROUGH THE CEMETERY

VERSE
Shortcut through the cemetery, Feel the ghosts from folks who live there
All around me
You know, I thought it would be scary, Unseen shadows everywhere
But I don't see

CHORUS
I'm blinded by my memories, As I am walking through the trees
I hear the rustling of the leaves, Complaining to the breeze

VERSE
Shortcut through the cemetery; Keep my head down as I'm walking
Through the grass
In the light I'm not so wary, But I really don't like talking
As I pass

CHORUS
I'm blinded by my memories, As I am walking through the trees
I hear the rustling of the leaves, Complaining to the breeze

BRIDGE
One stone draws me; One name engraved
He's not here wandering; He's laid aside his chains

CHORUS
I'm blinded by my memories, As I am walking through the trees
I hear the rustling of the leaves, Complaining to the breeze

© 2026 Vicki Morrison Goble

This song is my response to Prompt #4 of this winter's Facebook Singer-Songwriter Songwriting Challenge. I experimented with production on this one. I typed the chords into the app Songsmith. Then I loaded the result into Suno and had it make a cover. This was all instrumental only so far. Then I downloaded the stems from Suno and put my vocal track in, which (if I remember correctly) I had already done. And it fit. I didn't tinker at all with the stems from Suno; I just used them as they were. I spent some time on mixing them with my vocal but never felt like that went well.

Title: Ode to Minnesota

Dontcha know, we’d rather keep to ourselves
If we wanna be famous, we move somewhere else
But once in a while, without warnin’
Fame rolls in like it’s thunderstormin’

We know the feeling is shared by you
Usually you fly over or through
Once in a while, we catch your attention
And you mobilize in our direction

Fer cryin’ out loud
We’re not too proud … but

Chorus
We’re a pretty good state
Nice people everywhere
A pretty good state
Above average, if you compare
We know we’re far from perfect
Anyone can tell. But still…
We’re a pretty good state

We chase Gray Duck, you chase Goose.
You make sushi, we make lutefisk.
You think thirty-two is frigid
We wear shorts in single digits

(to Chorus)

We bootlegged booze from Saskatoon
To quench your thirst in Prohibition
We’re here for you if you need a cure
For your heart condition or drug addiction
Come over when you want more tape
To patch up your life’s mistakes
Just don’t play us like a purple pawn
We’ll pick ourselves up and carry on… ya… ‘cuz

(to Chorus)

You betcha… We’re a pretty good state

This song was inspired by recent events, but I'm hoping the theme is timeless.
This is a rough home recording with guitar and vocals by a non-professional musician (myself).
Looking for feedback on the songwriting itself (lyrics, melody, chords, etc.), not the production.

Verse 1
I’ve paid some dues I didn’t see coming
Took a few turns I wouldn’t take again
Learned the hard way what matters most
And who my real friends are in the end
Got some miles on these old boots now
Some doubts I still can’t outrun
But I’m standing here, still standing here
Guess that means I’ve won some

Pre-Chorus
Some nights when I’m talking to the ceiling
I swear somebody answers back

Chorus
I hear ghosts in the quiet cheering me on
In the spaces where the worry’s gone
They don’t shout, they don’t make a sound
But I know they’re proud of who I am now
Yeah, I feel ‘em close when I’m feeling lost
Like a hand on my shoulder when I’m tired of the cost
They’re not gone, they’re just out of sight
I hear ghosts in the quiet night

Verse 2
A song comes on right when I need it
From a time I thought was gone
Sounds like something my brother loved
Makes me turn it up and hum along
I catch his grin in the mirror
When I’m standing in the morning light
Same crooked smile, same stubborn heart
Still trying to get it right

Pre-Chorus
Some days when I’m talking to the ceiling
I swear somebody answers back

Chorus
I hear ghosts in the quiet cheering me on
In the spaces where the worry’s gone
They don’t shout, they don’t make a sound
But I know they’re proud of who I am now
Yeah, I feel ‘em close when I’m feeling lost
Like a hand on my shoulder when I’m tired of the cost
They’re not gone, they’re just out of sight
I hear ghosts in the quiet night

Bridge
I used to think I had to be perfect
Had to prove I deserved this life
Now I know it’s just about showing up
Doing your best and loving it right

Final Chorus (Lift)
I hear ghosts in the quiet cheering me on
In the spaces where the worry’s gone
They don’t shout, they don’t make a sound
But I know they’re proud of who I am now
Yeah, I feel ‘em close when I’m feeling lost
Like a hand on my shoulder when I’m tired of the cost
They’re not gone, they’re just out of sight
I hear ghosts in the quiet night

Outro
I’m here, and I’m trying my best tonight
With ghosts in the quiet night

Raw, buy honest

My Doll Collection (Revised 01/15/25)
(Verse 1)
All my friends say I need to settle down
They claim I dated every woman in town
I just tell them with a smile and reflection
They’re all part of my beautiful doll collection
(Chorus)
From that doll collection I tried to find a wife
But, all my efforts brought was more confusion and strife
I tried my best, but I couldn’t find the perfect mate
So, I accepted being a bachelor was my fate
(Verse 2)
I courted Daisy, Hazel and Jenny who were ramblers
Then there was Belle, Sue and Caroline… such gamblers
My girlfriends were sad, funny, short and tall
I parted ways with them, even though I loved them all
(Chorus)
From that doll collection I tried to find a wife
But, all my efforts brought was more confusion and strife
I tried my best, but I couldn’t find the perfect mate
So, I accepted being a bachelor was my fate
(Verse 3)
My doll collection grew through the years
But not finding a mate brought on my fears
I went on date after date trying to find the one
But, I struck out and came up with none
(Chorus)
From that doll collection I tried to find a wife
But, all my efforts brought was more confusion and strife
I tried my best, but I couldn’t find the perfect mate
So, I accepted being a bachelor was my fate

Outro
Then I saw Pearl at the rodeo one summer night
An angel that could save me from my doll collection plight
With one look I knew….YEAH! She was the one
And just like that, my doll collecting days were done

Yeeeeaaaa

(Copyright all right reserved for William J. Fritz and James Fritz AKA Jimmy Fat Fingers 08/24/25)
SUNO AI produced the music and vocal

VERSE 1
At water’s edge upon the beach
The long boat waits off shore.
Two lovers with their hands entwined
Wonder is there’s something more?

VERSE 2
Feelings buried now emerge
Tempered by their history
Resisting love’s delusions
They sense the possibility.

CHORUS
Dare they ….
Touch – Feel – Share – Trust —-Explore …?
VERSE 3
Waves reach out to touch the beach
Random life exposed in pools
With textured stones, small and frail
Glimmer like exotic jewels.

VERSE 4
Emotions, like waves that come
Explode and then recede.Two lovers on a journey.
Cautiously, they do proceed.

CHORUS.
Dare they ….
Touch – Feel – Share – Trust —-Explore …?

Dare they ….
Touch – Feel – Share – Trust —-Explore …?

BRIDGE
There is a path that lies ahead
Hidden in the dark sea mist
Known to each in longing
And felt with a lovers’ kiss
CHORUS
Dare they ….
Touch – Feel – Share – Trust —-Explore …?

Dare they ….
Touch – Feel – Share – Trust —-Explore …?

VERSE 5
The Sunset brings the close of day
Anticipation of the night
Absorbed in quiet splendor,
Bathed in a golden light.

VERSE 6
Side by side at water’s edge
Proceeding with hands held tight
Journey set, destination unknown
Yet, they walk into the night.

CHORUS.
Dare they ….
Touch – Feel – Share – Trust —-Explore …?

Dare they ….
Touch – Feel – Share – Trust —-Explore …?

Dare they not?

OUTGO (Spoken)

At water’s edge upon the beach
The long boat waits off shore.
Two lovers with their hands entwined
Have found …. something more.

This is Sheryl
s submission

CLOSER TO PERFECT

Verse 1
When we first met, I played hard to get
Like all the others, I kept my fair distance
I own my pickup truck, don’t need no assistance
Corral my heart, I’ll give you resistance

Chorus
But you offered me your heart
You’re awesome, sweet and smart
Now our love has a chance to start
Flowing, growing, closer
Closer to perfect

Verse 2
You changed my life, and turned me around
Every day with you, is way beyond compare
Magic as I watch you, just brush your hair
First time in my life, close to saying I care

Pre-Chorus
Getting closer, closer

Chorus
But you offered me your heart
You’re awesome, sweet and smart
Now our love has a chance to start
Flowing, growing, closer
Closer to perfect

Bridge (Instrumental – no lyrics)

Verse 3
I used to walk alone, shallow and incomplete
Couldn’t bare to lose you, I’d miss your heartbeat
I love to hold your hand, on a scary stormy night
Need to feel you tremble, when I hold you so tight

Pre-Chorus
Getting closer , closer

Chorus
But you offered me your heart
You’re awesome, sweet and smart
Now our love has a chance to start
Flowing, growing, closer
Closer to perfect

Contact: James M. Fritz, Song writer 2022 , BMI
jfritzws@hotmail.com

This song was written in 2022 submitted for review. I made some recommended changes. This song was produced using Suno Ai with specific instructions to cover songwriters demo exactly as to lyrics, melody, tempo, and chord structure. Suno Ai was used to professionally enhance vocals and instrumentation.This song is 100% human written melody and lyrics. Thanks for listening and your comments.

I couldn’t see the demons you were fighting
No, you kept them locked inside
Looking back, your warning signs were blinding
Should’ve known your smile was just a lie
Never would’ve thought you’d pull the trigger
Thought you’d be the one to pull ahead
Now the memory of that night still lingers
I wish I knew what I could’ve said…

[Chorus]
To make you change your mind
To make you want to stay
I wish you would have spoke up, reached out,
Searched for another way
You know I’ve been in your shoes
And I’d give my last breath
For you to choose
A way to stay

You left behind so many memories
There’s so many more you’ll never see
If you ever thought your life was empty
Know you were all we’d ever need
You would never cause us pain with intention
We just didn’t know what you were going through
We know you’re gone, but we still question
If we had one more chance what would we do…

[Repeat Chorus]

They say “time heals all wounds”
I say that’s a lie
We’ll never get over losing you
So many questions left unanswered
So many tears we have cried
I wonder if we could turn back time
Would you have tried…

[Repeat Chorus]

Melody & Lyrics are mine, Music & Vocals are AI by SUNO.

I wrote this as a way to cope the night my cousin ended his life. We grew up together and I miss him everyday. I have struggled with my own attempts and battles, and needed these words just as much as he did.

All the Same
Terry Kennedy-Lares 2026

It’s all the same promises you made to us before,
all the same lies, a liar to the core,
a politician, a rightwing politician
It’s all the same thinking that got us in this mess,
all the same hypocrisy, coming from the blessed.
They deceive us, The don’t follow Jesus.

Chorus
It’s all the same, it’s all the same,
When you play the rich man’s game.
It’s all the same, it’s all the same,
We all get used and the poor get blamed.

It’s all the same ignorance we see every day,
all the same anger, that shot and killed Renee.
’Tis the season of no moral reason
It’s all the same system that keeps a rich man rich,
all the same attitude that called Renee a bitch,
Not a nice man a toxic ICE man.

Chorus

It’s all the same excuses they used for Wounded Knee,
all the same reasons for every tragedy,
the only good one is a dead one.
It’s all the same system if you’re black or white,
all the same struggle, that we have to fight,
we’re all brothers, there are no others.

We’re all the same, we’re all the same
We won’t play the rich man’s game,
We’re all the same, We’re all the same,
Brothers and sisters, united again.

I've still got a lot to do in the recording process, but this gives you the general idea of the song.

NOTE: I will perform this song live."

ANY DAY NOW
By Paul Nye

VERSE 1:
We’re headed towards a cliff; truth is blind
I’m left of center, friends say I’ve lost my mind
Looking out my window at people marching with signs
While armed bullies stand like statues, frozen in time

CHORUS:
Any day now, this has got to end
Every day now, we fight back again
Any day now, something’s got to give
Fight evil, turn it around and we can live

VERSE 2:
It only took a spark to start a blaze of hate
It’s been coming for awhile; but might be too late
Something’s got to give, but it’ll take humility
Not spoken joke by those fluent in hypocrisy

CHORUS:
Any day now, this all will end
Any day now, this better end
Any day now, something’s got to give
Turn evil around and we can live

BRIDGE:
If the faces were different, would the silence be the same?
Or would truth finally matter if the skin took the blame?

END CHORUS:
Any day now, this all will end
Any day now, it’s got to end
Any day now, it better end soon
Cuz if it don’t, we might end too

I will be performing this song live.

Look At You Now

Look at those folks
who follow you 'round.
They're not your friends and they
raise their brows when you
talk like that,
make a fist and Wow!
Look at you know.

Even your friends are
wonderin' how you're the
fair-haired boy,
the cat's meow,
a golden calf
and a sacred cow
Look at you now!

Bridge:
You can't turn back or bail out now
the whole world knows you'll rip them off and
kick them 'round.

It's about time
you should be gone.
These short years
have been too long.
The shine's worn off
turn in your crown.
Look at you now

Bridge:

Ignore the first version of this song. I came up with this in about 2018. I’ve always thought I should revise the chorus/bridge. Recently resurrected it for the fun of it.

Verse 1
I can’t believe you just said

He can’t be sleeping in my bed 

Why can’t you get it through your head 

He’s simply my best friend 



You’re fixing to tell your truth 

The time has come for me to choose

Which one I’m willing to lose 

It’s either him or you

Chorus
If you want to force the issue 

You better grab a tissue 

This isn’t gonna go your way 

All week long and twice on Sunday 

Without a second thought 

I, I, I choose the dog 

I choose the dog

Verse 2 

You think he sits too close 

That his slobbery kisses are gross 

But you might want to take notes 

On why I love him the most 



Unlike you, he’s never too busy 

He doesn’t care when I don’t look pretty

He’s always happy just to be with me 

What part of that is so hard to see

Chorus 

If you don’t want to get on board 

You’re the one out the door 

There’s nothing left to say 

All week long and twice on Sunday 

Without a second thought

I, I, I choose the dog

I choose the dog

Bridge 

You really didn’t think this through 

When I ask who’s a good boy 

I’m not talking to you

Chorus 

If you think you’re the alpha here 

Let me make it crystal clear 

This isn’t gonna end your way 

All week long and twice on Sunday 

Without a second thought

I, I, I choose the dog 

I choose the dog 

I choose the dog

[spoken word]

YOU’re sleeping in the doghouse

Look At You Now

Look at those folks
who follow you 'round.
They're not your friends and they
raise their brows when you
talk like that,
make a fist and Wow!
Look at you know.

Even your friends are
wonderin' how you're the
fair-haired boy,
the cat's meow,
a golden calf
and a sacred cow
Look at you now!

Bridge:
You can't turn back or bail out now
the whole world knows you'll rip them off and
kick them 'round.

It's about time
you should be gone.
These short years
have been too long.
The shine's worn off
turn in your crown.
Look at you now

Bridge:

I came up with this song around 2018. Always liked it but never finished the bridge. Still needs work. Started doodling with it recently and resurrected it for your review.

VERSE 1:
Another magic night together
Sorry but I can’t stay
Gotta get back to my own place
You know I need my own space

VERSE 2:
I truly care about you
But not looking to start a new life
Don’t want to drive no minivan
Baby you need to understand

CHORUS:
I’m not your forever man
That’s not who I am
Not ready to settle down
I need more time to run around
I’m not your forever man

VERSE 3:
Don’t want to cause you pain
There’s nothing I’m trying to hide
I want to treat you with respect
By telling you what to expect

VERSE 4:
No use in trying to change me
I’m not a bronco you can tame
There well may come a day
When I’ll break loose and run away

BRIDGE:
We have a good thing going
Who knows when it might end
As long as we are both clear-eyed
We can kick back and enjoy the ride

CHORUS:
I’m not your forever man
That’s not who I am
Not ready to settle down
I need more time to run around
I’m not your forever man

© 2026 | Greg Beck | 320-266-2460

A simple song about a simple guy.

RIVERS OF MY LIFE ©2021 by John Bennett

When I look back on the path that has brought me here
steered a force that’s flowing
flowing through all my years
flowing through all my years

CH
Life pulls me along from beginning to end
Watching as the world goes by
As one thing ends another begins
I’m carried by the rivers of my life
carried by the rivers of my life

Friends always changing rearrangin’ as life goes along
Like rapids converging Merging to a place where I be-long
a place where I be-long

I follow it from beginning to end as I follow this path
Watching as the world go by
As one thing ends another begins
carried by all the rivers of my life

Waters converging
Merging to a place to belong

Feedback welcomed

Red White and Blue
[Verse 1]
He said “Why does Grampa’s coffin,
Have that flag across the lid?”
And tell me what the colors mean again,
I said grandpa was a soldier,
When he was young,
The flag reminds us all, he was one,
As for the colors…son
[Chorus]
Red is for the blood that's shed,
Poured out on foreign soil,
White is for the carefree smile,
Soldiers lose at war,
The blue behind the stars is like,
Their courage that won’t fade
And the color of our free skies,
Paid for by the brave,
Just for you,
That's why the red white and blue
[Verse 2]
He turned to his sister,
Said I know somethin' you don't,
She said hush now let the preacher preach his notes,
He looked at me, and when I smiled
He whispered in her ear,
His words were perfectly clear,
I heard him say…
[Chorus]
Red is for the blood that's shed,
Poured out on foreign soil,
White is for the carefree smile,
Soldiers lose at war,
The blue behind the stars is like,
Their courage that won’t fade
And the color of our free skies,
Paid for by the brave,
Just for you,
That's why the red white and blue
[Bridge]
He stood up from the pew,
And walked up to the front,
Said with a salute…
[Chorus 2]
Red is for the blood you shed,
Poured out on foreign soil,
White is for the carefree smile,
Dad said you lost at war,
The blue behind the stars is like,
Your courage that won’t fade
And the color of our free skies,
Paid for by the brave,
Just like you,
That's why the red white and blue
[Chorus]
Red is for the blood that's shed,
Poured out on foreign soil,
White is for the carefree smile,
Soldiers lose at war,
The blue behind the stars is like,
Their courage that won’t fade
And the color of our free skies,
Paid for by the brave,
Just for you,
That's why the red white and blue
[Outro]
That's why the red white and blue,
God bless the red white and blue

TICKY TICKY, TOCK
Written by James M. Fritz · December 2025

Intro (Sound of a ticking clock)

Verse 1
Time has passed me by, in a blink of an eye
Said the old man, on the park bench nearby
As a young’un, time moved unhurried, like a slow burning fire
Eighteen I put away my childhood dreams, time to aspire

Pre-Chorus (Spoken)
Tapping his cane, the old man began to sing……

Chorus
Ticky ticky tock, ticky ticky tock
Listen to the clock go, ticky ticky tock
Forever ticking clock
Ticky ticky tock, ticky ticky tock
Ticky, ticky, ticky tock
Ticky, ticky, ticky, ticky tock

Verse 2
The man said, at forty, time ran uncontrolled
Like a car with a four-barrel carb, and an open manifold
A wife with three kids, I lost my race with time
Life passed me by, right in the middle of my prime

Chorus
Ticky ticky tock, ticky ticky tock
Listen to the clock go, ticky ticky tock
Forever ticking clock
Ticky ticky tock, ticky ticky tock
Ticky, ticky, tickey tock
Ticky, ticky, ticky, ticky tock

Verse 3
Now days are routine, my cholesterol’s a disaster
At seventy-five, the finish line draws near faster
Life moves fast, like the fluttering wings of hummingbirds
Young man throw caution to the wind, hear my words

Bridge
If I could start anew, what would I do
I must proclaim, I’d do it all the same
Cause that clock she keeps right on a ticking

Chorus
Ticky ticky tock, ticky ticky tock
Listen to the clock go, ticky ticky tock
Forever ticking clock
Ticky ticky tock, ticky ticky tock
Ticky, ticky, ticky tock
Ticky, ticky, ticky, ticky tock
Ticky, ticky, ticky tock
Ticky, ticky ticky, ticky tock

Contact: James M. Fritz
jfritzws@hotmail.com | 651-368-4866

This song describes an old man lamenting how he viewed time passage at different ages of his life. I created a song demo and lyric sheet which I downloaded into Suno Ai. I then directed Suno to strictly cover the song demo, lyrics, melody, chord structure and tempo. The resulting track is functionally identical to my human made demo, but enhanced with professional grade instrumentation and vocal polish.

LADY LUCK SPIT IN MY EYE

Verse 1
I always believed we would wed
Then you told me our love was dead
I’m losing my dreams and my lover
Today you’re marrying another
Here I sit in this lonely pew
Thinking of, how I lost you

CHORUS
Lady Luck, she spit in my eye
Cupid, he waved bye bye
Rainbows, looking mighty small
My lucky horseshoe, slid off the wall
Cupid’s kiss, was a big fat lie
Lady Luck, she spit in my eye

Verse 2
You pass me as you walk down the aisle
Our eyes meet and you give that smile
At the altar you say “I do”
His eyes are locked, in love with you
I stay in my seat, till everyone’s gone
Thinking I was just, just your pawn

CHORUS
Lady Luck she spit in my eye
Cupid, he waved bye bye
Rainbows looking mighty small
My lucky horseshoe slid off the wall
Cupid’s kiss was a big fat lie
Lady Luck she spit in my eye
Verse 3
You married, and moved far away
Friends say you’re happy in Santa Fe
What will I do with my wasted life
Maybe drink, gamble and stir up strife
I’m gonna go crazy, stamp me “certified”
The men in white, might take me for a ride”

Chorus
Lady Luck she spit in my eye
Cupid, he waved bye bye
Rainbows looking mighty small
My lucky horseshoe slid off the wall
Cupid’s kiss was a big fat lie
Lady Luck she spit in my eye

William J. Fritz & James M. Fritz AKA Jimmy Fat Fingers Composers 2024 BMI One-Stop, Cleared for Sync, jfritzws@hotmail.com

This is a co-written song enhanced by Suno AI. Jim and Bill Fritz composed the lyrics and melody. Then submitted a song demo with lyrics instructing Suno AI to cover the song exactly as to lyrics and melody Suno AI was used to enhance a professional grade imitation and instrumentation with vocal polish.

In The Aftermath ©2025 Doug Millaway

The moon has fallen from our sky
And silence lingers where it shone
The sun won't rise, we don't know why
Just that something's deeply wrong

Reach down deep to face the fear
Fight or flight our only path
Everything has changed from here
This is life in the aftermath

When solid ties are powder thin
And trust is hard to name
The ones we leaned from disappear
While hearts assign the blame

Reach down deep to face the fear
Fight or flight our only path
Everything has changed from here
This is life in the aftermath

We lit a fire to chase the dark
Shared stories through the night
Even when the world fell apart
We held each other tight
And misery feels like home
Gravity pulls from the sky
When everything begins to hold
Time slows as moments multiply

We calmed the sea with steady hands
And made the waves our friends
We count our blessings where we stand
It's good to know it's not the end

Reach down deep to face the fear
Fight or flight our only path
Everything has changed from here
This is life in the aftermath

Vocal by Clare Dove. I wrote this one about the state of affairs in the country about a year ago. It's even more true today.

ELLA 18

INTRO:
Oooooooo-ooooooo hey Ella! Oooooooo-ooooooo hey Ella!
Eighteen years old finishin’ up high school
Got the grades for college, worked hard, you’re no fool
You got options for the place you want to stay
Can you think, are you happy, are you safe, can you play

Pick a major ask yourself that question
If you don’t mind, here’s a friendly suggestion
Finance makes you smart about your money
And if you can see some Law in your degree
No one will steal it from you, honey!

HA HA HA! HEE HEE HEE! HA HA HA! HEE HEE HEE!

Oooooooo-ooooooo hey Ella! Oooooooo-ooooooo hey Ella!
Treat other people like you wanna be treated
I hope you always look before you leap
Give your chair to someone who can’t walk as well as you
Don’t make any promises you don’t intend to keep

Pick a major ask yourself that question
If you don’t mind, here’s a friendly suggestion
Finance makes you smart about your money
And if you can see some Law in your degree
No one will steal it from you, honey!
HA HA HA! HEE HEE HEE! HA HA HA! HEE HEE HEE!
HA HA HA! HEE HEE HEE! HA HA HA! HEE HEE HEE!
Oooooooo-ooooooo hey Ella!
Oooooooo-ooooooo hey Ella!

Copyright 2025 Wayne Hamilton. All rights reserved.

Uploaded for Wayne by Doug

IT'S STILL CHRISTMAS TO ME ©December 2025 by John Bennett

Happy Solstice and Hanukkah Season and Kwanza
A Holiday a Winter break Any way you celebrate
Light up a Menorah or a Christmas tree
Ornaments put up on main street
Presents to wrap Songs sung with Glee
But may I tell you what this time of year means to me…

CHORUS

It's still Christmas It's still Christmas to me
It's still Christmas Yes It’s Christmas to me
It’s Merry Christmas It’s Merry Christmas to me
Say Merry Christmas It's still Christmas to me

It’s not what you name it or what is right
But don't erase Christmas from our sight
There something wonderful this time of year
The heart warms us all with winter cheer
You can call it love you can call it grace
Finding joy and peace in each and every way But… CHORUS

I still need a bridge between choruses at end. This will have a Harmonies with a children's choir similar to John Lennon's Happy Xmas (War Is Over)

The Time Has Come
Terry Kennedy-Lares Copyright 2025

Jesus had a mission, from his father up above,
To spend his time on Earth, Teaching us to love.
He said, “Come on, Follow me, the time has come”.

In the Jordan River, Jesus met with John,
The Dove flew down and Blessed him, he was the righteous one,
He said, “Come on, Follow me, the time has come”.

Blessed are the poor in spirit, Blessed are they that mourn,
Blessed are those who hunger, to be the righteous ones,
He said, “Come on, Follow me, the time has come.”

Bridge:
On the Mount he taught us to hold each other dear,
He said to love your neighbor, and he made it clear,
You turn the other cheek, and do unto the least,
And if you follow him, you will find eternal peace.

Jerusalem was calling him, he rode in on an ass,
He told his disciples, what would come to pass,
He said, “Come on, Follow me, the time has come.

Jesus had a mission from his father up above,
to spend his time on Earth, teaching us to love.
He said, “Come on, Follow me, the time has come.

Early in the recording and production part of this song. But I Thought I'd present it anyway.

I was raised in the northland’s theater of seasons
Christmas snow was a welcome sight
My ancestors were Swedes and Norwegians
Who taught me how to frolic in all that white

Christmas time should not be green and brown
I pity folks in the southern climes
They’ll never know the joys that are found
When the snow falls at Christmas time

Chorus:
Let’s bundle up and head outside
It’s cold out doncha know
Ski and slide take a snowmobile ride
Have Christmas in the Snow
Have Christmas in the Snow

Could have packed up moved to a warmer state
Florida Texas Arizona
But I’d miss part of what makes Christmas great
In my hometown in Minnesota

Like carols sung by a roving choir
Colored bulbs glowing in the night
Hot chocolate by a roaring bonfire
The wonder of the northern lights

[Repeat chorus]

Bridge:
Now it’s true there are those who live among us
Who have never made a snowman
Never played outdoors in the winter months
We love ‘em but they’re not real Minnesotans

[Repeat chorus]

©2025 | Greg Beck Music | 320-266-2460

When You Lied To Me ©2025 Doug Millaway

When you lied to me
I knew that I had to go
Cause faithless love is worthless love
And right now, that seems to be all that you can show

Because you lied to me
I knew it was coming to an end
Everything came crashing down
When you called her just a friend

Well, I've been let down before
I can't take it anymore
It hurts like hell, it hurts like hell
Even more than you can tell
Broke away from your spell
When you lied to me
When you lied to me

Don't cry for me
I know what to do
Relentless life is ahead of me,
It's all because I trusted in you

Because you lied to me
I knew all these things would not last
I know, I know that you loved her once
But that was way in the past

Well, I've been let down before
I can't take it anymore
It hurts like hell, it hurts like hell
Even more than you can tell
Broke away from your spell
When you lied to me
When you lied to me
More than you can tell
Broke away from your spell

When you lied to me
When you lied to me

Vocal by Clare Dove. I wrote this song a while back using just a simple ukulele pattern. Clare is not a Country singer generally speaking, so I asked her to sing with a bit of a Country/Pop sound. Do you think the simplicity of the arrangement is enough?

Verse 1
I didn’t stare at her taillights driving away
‘Cause it seemed like such a cliché
Instead I thought about all my sins
Watching colors dancing in the distance

They were so beautiful I couldn’t look away
Though I didn’t like what the lights had to say
Painting all the signs I missed
That I didn’t love her like I promised

Chorus
The green shows me how my jealousy
Made me her worst enemy
The red shows me how my anger
Cost me everything that mattered
Those colors all mean something
About why I now have nothing
All my failures glowing across the sky
Those northern lights don’t lie

Verse 2
Who’ll laugh at our inside jokes
Who’ll make this house a home
Who’ll be sittin’ right by my side
Bingeing a show all through the night

She did every little thing for me
And I made her feel like a nobody
She loved me harder than I deserved
And all I did was make her hurt

Chorus
The yellow shows me how my fear
Kept me from making my feelings clear
The blue shows me how I never asked
Whether she was happy or sad
Those colors all mean something
About why I now have nothing
All my failures glowing across the sky
Those northern lights don’t lie

Bridge
It wasn’t her cries
That made me realize
The blame was all mine
It was those northern lights

Chorus
Green, red, yellow, and blue
Just symbols for all I put her through
Those colors all mean something
About why I now have nothing
All my failures glowing across the sky
Those northern lights don’t lie

No, those northern lights don’t lie

Song Title: Just Weren’t Promises
Writer: James M. Fritz
Date Written: March 2022

VERSE 1

One summer night, lit only by pale moonlight
You appeared, a spirit lovely and bright
A beautiful dream, never to be awoke
Our bonds of love, tragically were broke

Pre-Chorus

Yeah, the devil, he came along
He drove you, to sing his song
Maybe, I was to blame
Or was our love, merely a game

Chorus

Promises, we made
We never, never kept
Promises betrayed
Just weren’t promises, at all

Verse 2

Our old little house, with a white picket fence
Was our life together, born on false pretense
You walked away, leaving me and my heartache
Darkness you chose, tempted by that serpent snake

Pre-Chorus (repeat)

Yeah, the devil he came along
He drove you to sing his song
Maybe I was to blame
Or was our love, merely a game

Chorus (repeat)

Promises we made
We never, never kept
Promises betrayed,
Just weren’t promises, at all

Verse 3

If you should ask, please take me back
What would, I say
Bridges were burned,
And all our trust, washed away,

Chorus (repeat)

Promises we made
We never, never kept
Promises betrayed
Just weren’t promises, at all
Just weren’t promises, at all

Written in 2022 I presented this song to MAS Song Review. I made some suggested changes. This song was produced using Suno Ai with directions to exactly cover my song demo lyrics, melody, chord structure, tempo and key. The result was a Suno recording that mirrors my song demo melody and lyrics.

SAYING GOODBYE
By Paul Nye

VERSE 1:
I’m packing up my life, saying goodbye to all my friends
Moving down the road creating memories again
That don’t fade away they just grow old
The next chapter’s been written, but the story’s unfold

CHORUS:
You never outgrow your hometown — it just fits you less each year
And the things you thought you’d die for slowly disappear
Everything is getting smaller in your rear view mirror
I’m saying goodbye to this old town, the future’s getting near

VERSE 2:
Been driving down that highway called Aging Avenue
Time turns like seasons and changes my view
Good memories stay with me and bring peace of mind
Might be leaving this town, but I’m leaving part of me behind

CHORUS:
You never outgrow your hometown — it just fits you less each year
And the things you thought you’d die for slowly disappear
Everything is getting smaller in your rear view mirror
Saying goodbye to this old town, the future’s getting near

BRIDGE:
I’ve walked these floors a thousand times, now boxes line the wall
I tell myself it’s just a move — not a curtain call
But some nights I lie awake and wonder what if I’m wrong
Then morning comes, a voice inside says, “It’s time to move on”

CHORUS:
You never outgrow your hometown — it just fits you less each year
And the things you thought you’d die for slowly disappear
Everything is getting smaller in your rear view mirror
I’m saying goodbye to this old town, the future’s getting near
I’m saying goodbye to this town, the future’s getting near

“SAYING GOODBYE” © By Paul Nye
nyesguyTunes Publishing/BMI * paulenye@me.com

Change in one word in chorus. "Swore" is being changed to "thought." So the line reads, "The things you thought you'd die for, slowly disappear."

Sands Of Time

[Verse 1]
Daydreamin’, walkin' in the sea breeze
Reminiscin' life on the sand as I played each scene
Then I noticed, walkin’ along side me
Was Jesus Christ, wo is me

[Verse 2]
I humbly asked, "Where did you come from"?
He said "I've been here all a long"
I said "How could… how could… how could that be"?
He turned to me and looked, and said "Son what do you mean"?
And I said…

[Chorus 1]
Lookin’ back now at my sands of time
I can clearly see the one footprint's mine
In the times of life I'm not doin’ fine
Where did you go?
Where did you go?
Where did you go?

[Verse 3]
With a tear in his eye he said "Son you're lookin cold".’
"I've offered before, but why don't you take my robe,
And as we walk I'll tell you what I've done,
You'll see a new light when you look at those prints of one".
And he said…

[Chorus 2]
Lookin’ back now at your sands of time
Be assured those prints you see are mine
In the times of life you're not doin’ fine
They carry you,
They carry you,
I carried you…

[Verse 3]
I turned back to look but again I didn't see him
And I was sure not to make that same mistake again
I'm no longer, no longer cold
Still on me, still on me is his robe…
Is his robe

[Chorus 3]
Looking back now at the sands of time
Be assured those prints aren't yours or mine
In the times of life you're not doing fine
He carries you,
He carries you,
He carries you
[Outro]
Walking through your sands of time,
sometimes
He carries you

This is the bulk of one of the first songs I'd written back in 1992 or 93. I re-wrote it from The Robe to Sands of Time in 2000. Based on the poem Footprints In the Sand. Any comments welcome.

Verse 1:
I got a nagging feeling things ain’t right
Can’t ever relax always so uptight
My thoughts keep jumping from place to place
My brains in orbit lost in space

Chorus:
Down seems up up seems down
Never standing on solid ground
No idea what I should do
I got them soul searching introspection blues

Verse 2:
Went to the doctor and the doctor said
The problem’s all up in your head
Self analysis is causing your stress
You’re thinking too much gotta give it a rest

Chorus:
Easy to say not easy to quit
Stuck in the bottom of a bottomless pit
No idea what I should do
I got them soul searching introspection blues

Verse 3:
That voice inside of me keeps insisting
I need to find that thing I am missing
Can’t keep pondering at this pace
Need to find a little breathing space

Bridge:
Heading out on the road leave the grind behind
Maybe I can find some peace of mind
I know’s there’s gotta be something more
Wish I knew what I was searching for

Chorus:
Down seems up up seems down
Never standing on solid ground
No idea what I should do
I got them soul searching introspection blues

©2025 | Greg Beck Music | 320-266-2460

DON’T MARRY A GIRL YOU MEET IN A BAR
By Paul Nye

VERSE 1:
She was so good-lookin’, and I was pretty drunk
I could tell she was more than I deserved, more than I ever thunk
She grabbed my arm and dragged me, out on that dance floor
We raised our glasses, had a party that night, and did so much more

PRE-CHORUS:
Then I remember what mama once said…

CHORUS:
Be careful how you pick your friends, be careful what you say
Cuz what you hear in a dark honky tonk could be different the next day
Be careful who you bring home, don’t let her drive your car
And mama said her best advice of all was…Don’t marry a girl that you meet in a bar

VERSE 2:
My mama was a good looker, she liked 2-steppin’ country songs
Daddy liked her style & they hooked up; soon I came along
But momma liked to dance and drink, and her and daddy would aways fight
Wasn’t too long & my daddy moved on; mama learned a lesson that night

CHORUS:
Be careful how you pick your friends, be careful what you say
What you hear in a dark honky tonk could be different the next day
Be careful who you bring home, don’t let her drive your car
And mama said her best advice of all was…Don’t marry a girl that you meet in a bar

BRIDGE:
Mama saw daddy at a small town bar, she was lookin’ for the man of her dreams
It all happened so fast & that marriage didn’t last, a bad fairytale, it seems

VERSE 3:
Now it’s been 20 years of marriage, two kids, a home and a dog
We worked hard through the good & bad; together is where we belong
Mama was wise, but wrong this time, cuz I’m so in love with my wife
She and me, our dog and family is where I wanna live my life

END CHORUS:
Be careful how you pick your friends, but be a good one everyday
Cuz your mama has her own ideas, and you think in a different way
We all need each other in this ol’ world, you’re right where you belong
Go out a make a friend, and marry whoever you want
Yeah, get out make a new friend today, and marry whoever you want

“DON’T MARRY A GIRL YOU MEET IN A BAR” © 2025 by Paul Nye
nyesguyTunes * paulenye@me.com * 218-507-0081

Written in response after SongTown review session listening to country-song-after-country-song all with the same theme: "drinking, picking up chicks in bars, one-night-stands, pickup trucks," blah, blah, blah.

Used to be a Rocker
(chorus)
He used to be a rocker
Had the world in his pocket
Doesn’t live by the words he wrote
Got a tie wrapped around his throat
(verse)
Living hard and riding fast
Always thought those days would last
Pays to drive on the freeway
There’s no exit on the lost highway
(verse)
Thinking of the good old days
Geriatric rock on the radio plays
Time is passing way too fast
Yells at the kids to get off the grass
(chorus)
He used to be a rocker
Had the world in his pocket
Doesn’t live by the words he wrote
Got a tie wrapped around his throat
(Bridge)
A deadly weapon can’t hold back his rage
Thinks he’s riding out on the range
The Boss is featured in an old folks’ magazine
Hears the music but he doesn’t sing
(chorus)
He used to be a rocker
He used to be a rocker
Doesn’t live by the words he wrote
He used to be a rocker
He used to be a rocker

Words and Music by Michael Robinson @2025

Performed via AI through Suno.

Act one is when Darkness fell
No hope was left in the wishing well
Hounddogs were sounding the alarm
Trying to protect their Cheddar Ranch Farm

Blossom the Possum was having her a snack
In the bird garden out in the back
Tried to scare her away, but she didn't move
Kept nibbling away, I played the fool

Act two was Dejavvu all over again
Hounddogs felt they'd never win
Once again they sounded the alarm
Said that S.O.B. Will never learn

Blossom the Possum was busted for taking a nap
Under the Evergreen, on a Gunny Sack
We're the Regal Beagles, let's make that point clear
Get your tail the hell Out of Here

Act three was the last straw
She was playing dead by the Gazebo Wall
Hounddog Heroes did the Bob and Weave
No good deed goes unpunished, they came to believe

Those fun sucking humans kept shouting get back
Just three ticks away from a heart attack
Hounddogs reluctantly Complied
Live to fight another Day, Bigger Fish to Fry

Blossom the Possum said this is alright
On my way home, gonna grab me a bite
Knocked off that Suet, one more time
If You're not Cheating, You're not Trying, said that NASCAR Sign

True Possum stories from the Cheddar Ranch, with a little AI help :-)

[Verse 1]
Used a dating app to try something new
But from the moment we met
Your arrogance shone through
And I knew…I should’ve swiped left

You were an expert on every subject
Even when I won the debate
You would say I was incorrect
I’m lucky you’re here to set me straight

[Chorus]
Listen here, I have my own mind
I’m going to tell you this just one time
I’ll try to say it nice and loud
So there’s absolutely no doubt
And it’s perfectly clear for you
There’s no mansplaining to do

[Verse 2]
You asked what I did for a living
Cutting me off before I could finish
Because from where you’re sittin’
I’d be better off to shut up and listen

You told me you were concerned
Saying I should take some notes
Giving me facts I really should learn
From a book I literally wrote

[Chorus]
Listen here, I have my own mind
You obviously didn’t hear me the first time
I’ll say it again, nice and loud
So there’s absolutely no doubt
And it’s perfectly clear for you
There’s no mansplaining to do

[Bridge]
I’m not saying I’m perfect
Or that I know it all
But if I ever need your help
I’ll be sure to give you a call
(Don’t wait by the phone)

[Chorus]
Listen here, I have my own mind
I’m going to tell you this one more time
I’ll say it again, nice and loud
So there’s absolutely no doubt
And it’s perfectly clear for you
There’s no mansplaining to do

No mansplaining to do

There’s no mansplaining to do

Letting Your Heart Go ©2025 Doug Millaway/Kimberly Korn

Even though it took this long,
Now you’re finally startin’ to see.
It ain’t just about our late-night talks,
It’s about what we could be.

I'm not here for half the ride,
I need a love that’s built to last.
More than gestures, more than words,
Not a fire that burns out fast

No more walls.
No more fears
Now you know that I’m right here.
You see what I always knew
Feelings are startin’ to show,

It ain’t about playin’ it safe,
It’s about lettin’ your heart go
It ain’t about playin’ it safe,
It’s about lettin’ your heart go
Letting your heart go
Letting your heart go
Letting your heart go
Letting your heart go

You held back, afraid to lose,
But baby, it’s a risk we gotta take.
We’ve both been through it all
Love, loss, and heartbreak

I'm not here for half the ride,
I need a love that’s built to last.
More than gestures, more than words,
Not a fire that burns out fast

No more walls.
No more fears
Now you know that I’m right here.
You see what I always knew
Feelings are startin’ to show,

It ain’t about playin’ it safe,
It’s about lettin’ your heart go
Letting your heart go
Letting your heart go

It ain’t about playin’ it safe,
It’s about lettin’ your heart go
Letting your heart go
Letting your heart go

[Outro
(ad libs)
It ain’t about playin’ it safe,
It’s about lettin’ your heart go
Letting your heart go
Letting your heart go
Letting your heart go
Letting your heart go

A co-write with Kimberly Korn from NY. She helped edit the lyrics.

I Song Title: Rain or Shine
Writer: James M. Fritz
Date Written: August 2023

Intro (Whistling)

Verse 1
Sunny and bright, everything’s right
You’re my star in the night
Because of you, I’m no longer blue
I’m so in love with you
Sunrise to sunset, we’re a great duet
In a portrait or a vignette
Like paper and glue, I’m stuck on you
Head over heels for you

Chorus
Rain or shine, you’ll always be mine
Sunny or grey, we’re on cloud nine
Hot or cold, you’re my sunshine
You will always be my valentine
Rain or shine
Rain or shine

Bridge
(Whistling)

Chorus (repeat)
Rain or shine, you’ll always be mine
Sunny or gray, we’re on cloud nine
Hot or cold, you’re my sunshine
You will always be my valentine
Rain or shine
Rain or shine

Verse 2
Cloudy today, that’s okay
We’ll celebrate our wedding day
You by my side, my love and pride
Soon you’ll be my bride
Sunny and bright, our vows unite
Life’s honeymoon, begins tonight
Love in our hearts, new lives to start
Promise we’ll never part

Chorus (repeat)
Rain or shine, you’ll always be mine
Sunny or gray, we’re on cloud nine
Hot or cold, you’re my sunshine
You will always be my valentine
Rain or shine
Rain or shine

I wrote this song in 2023 and presented to MAS. Wayne suggested changing minor chords in chorus to major. I made that change, added whistling to Intro and Bridge. Recorded this version on Suno Ai using female singer.

[INTRO]

[VERSE 1]
I’m just a country man, edges kind of rough
Lonely like a back road, dreams covered in dust
Gave up on love, with no end in sight
Until you came along things never worked out right.

[PRE CHORUS]
Now pain no longer finds its way
You turned my nights into the day.
Your smile’s where I want to stay
It lifts me higher every day

[CHORUS]
All it took was your loving touch
To let me know I was enough
You’re a gift sent from above
Healed my heart with your endless love
You made my broken heart believe
You brought the best man out of me
And all it took was your loving touch.

[Instrumental Break]

[VERSE 2]
You saw the best in me, like no one could.
made this old house feel, like it should.
You light the fire in the, coldest night
You turned the cold in me to warm and bright.

[CHORUS]
All it took was your loving touch
To let me know I was enough
You’re a gift sent from above
Healed my heart with your endless love
You made my broken heart believe
You brought the best man out of me
And all it took was your loving touch.
[Post-Chorus]

[BRIDGE]
Your smile’s the place I want to stay
Where pain no longer finds it’s way
Like sunlight breaking through the rain
You’re the reason love lives here again

[CHORUS]
All it took was your loving touch
To let me know I was enough
You’re a gift sent from above
Healed my heart with your endless love
You made my broken heart believe
You brought the best man out of me
You brought the best man out of me
And all it took was your loving touch.

[Outro]

I heard Sheryl's songwriting talent at one of these meetings and contacted her right away for a cowrite. We worked well together for a great cowrite. There is more that we'd like to rewrite.

A Man Alone copyright 1986
Terry Kennedy-Lares

He was alright, all on his own,
He had to fight, just to hold his own,

Sitting in the bar, drinking, trying to ease his mind
got into his car, trying to leave it all behind,
remembering the fights, all the drunken nights,
all the things he tried to say.
Trying to keep her home, she left him all alone,
why do things just go that way.

Just a man, he was all alone,
without a friend, he could call his own,

Sitting at the bar, thinking, watching his life go by,
Sitting in his brand new car, not knowing how to cry,
He said, “wait a minute please, won’t you help me please,
won’t you tell me what to do.
Take a look at me, tell me what you see,
I just wish it all was through.

Trying to keep his mind from thinking all the time,
what is he trying to prove.

He was a man, only yesterday,
and now he’s gone, just a lump of clay,

Now he has his peace, now his mind’s at ease,
Now his problems are all through.

[Verse 1]

My lipstick is flawless

Not a hair out of place

But here I sit again

Black tears streaming down my face



Soon you'll be home

With another lame excuse

Thinking I'll stand by my man

Like a good girl's supposed to do

[Pre-Chorus]

Instead, I'm gonna fix my makeup

And then start this breakup

[Chorus]

Once I have perfectly made-up eyes

My mouth will be yelling bye-bye

While my legs carry me across the floor

So my hands can open up that door

To a new life where I get to have some fun

This time my mascara's the only part of me

That's not gonna run

[Verse 2]

I'm sure you think saying sorry 

Will get you another chance

But no more, I'll be leaving 

Without a backward glance

I'll be jumping in the car 

And throwing it in drive

Slamming my foot on the gas 

And making that motor fly

[Pre-Chorus]

When I finally look in the rearview

I'll see a twinkle that's brand new

[Chorus]

Once I have perfectly made-up eyes

My mouth will be yelling bye-bye

While my legs carry me across the floor

So my hands can open up that door

To a new life where I get to have some fun

This time my mascara's the only part of me

That's not gonna run

[Bridge]

You want to live your life like you're a single man

Well good news, honey, starting now, you can

[Chorus]

Once I have perfectly made-up eyes

My mouth will be yelling bye-bye

While my legs carry me across the floor

So my hands can open up that door

To a new life where I get to have some fun

This time my mascara's the only part of me

That's not gonna run

Not gonna run

Not gonna run

I know it’s hard to even keep track
Of all the rules and laws under attack
It’s not the time to look the other way
Think that everything is gonna be OK
Not see it slipping away

They’re doing everything they can
To make us all afraid to take a stand
We have let them know we see
What they’re doing to democracy
It belongs to you and me

Chorus:
We need your voice
It’s now or never it’s now or never
We need your voice
Use it now before it’s gone forever forever forever
Before they take it away

They scrape and bow and pledge their loyalty
To a man they treat like royalty
Who wants to be the only one
To dictate everything that’s done
A constitutional end run

The only way we’re going to shut him down
Let him know he doesn’t wear a crown
Is to call out shameless moves and lies
Show we’ll never let our freedoms die
Not slip into dictatorship

[Repeat chorus]

Bridge:
The fascist playbook is their guide
Total control is what what they seek
Billionaires get a free ride
To treat the rest of us like sheep
Now is not the time to be meek

[Repeat chorus]

©2025 | Greg Beck Music

The man in the White House is just itching to be king
He wants all the power and all the riches it brings
His admirers love him dearly, and they all want to wear his hat
”I alone can fix it,” he says ”I’ll tell you where it’s at.

He likes to hug flags with his tiny little hands
He likes to hold rallies all across the land
He'll pay for your lawyer if you knock a libtard to the ground
"Oh look, there's my golf course, let's go play a round".

I’m King, I’m King. You can’t tell me otherwise.
I rule, I rule. Just forget about all my lies.
I got the votes. I got the crowds. I got my very own TV station.
Welcome to my world. Welcome to my coronation.
Let's make America Great.

Melania was smart enough to start hangin' with this fella
They share everything except for his big old umbrella
He's a twit that tweets on Twitter every single minute
He'd like to be a leader, but his heart's not really in it.

My sons and my daughter are just waiting for their turn.
Just watch me, kids. There’s really so much to learn.
Get a small loan from Daddy and see how smart you become.
”Oh look, there’s a Big Mac. I think I’ll go get me one”

I’m King, I’m King. You can’t tell me otherwise.
I rule, I rule. Just forget about all my lies.
I got the votes. I got the crowds. I got my very own TV station.
Welcome to my world. Welcome to my coronation.
Let's make America Great Again.

Believe it or not, this song was originally written in October of 2020. Some things change. Some things stay the same. I'm wondering if I leave it alone or if I update it.

WHERE LOVE AND CONSEQUENCE MEET
By Paul Nye

VERSE 1:
An empty swing sways in the backyard, where Jimmy & Susie once played
Her doll lies still in the ditch, and Jimmy has no words to say
Susie’s mom and dad sit silent, ‘round the kitchen table tonight
No words could bring comfort, of what they feel inside

VERSE 2:
Susie was walking home one evening, as Jimmy turned his eyes from the road
To read a text from his girlfriend saying, her love for him had grown cold
He never saw it coming , thought one day she’d be his bride
Dropped his phone when he looked up, and saw the fear in little Susie’s eyes

CHORUS:
Life can change in an instant, our dreams become the cost. We search for grace and mercy, when we feel empty & lost. Yeah, 
 Life can change in an instant, the pain is dark & deep, 
 Yet hope still lives inside, where love and consequence meet. Where love and consequence meet

VERSE 3:
Now Susie wears a dress of redemption, and Jimmy is paying the price
Their mom & dad are caught between their love for a son & their little girl who died
They live with the consequence, the pain and hurt never goes away
But they cling to love & forgiveness; hoping they’ll be a family one day

CHORUS:
Life can change in an instant, and our dreams become the cost. We search for grace and mercy, when we feel empty & lost. Yeah, 
 Life can change in an instant, the pain is dark & deep, 
 Yet hope still lives inside, where love and consequence meet. Where love and consequence meet

BRIDGE:

They pray for strength they don’t possess, to accept what they can’t forget,


CHORUS:
Life can change in an instant, our dreams become the cost. We search for grace and mercy, at the foot of the cross. Yeah, 
 Life can change in an instant, though the pain is dark & deep, 
 Yet hope still lives inside, where love and consequence meet. Hope still lives inside, where love and consequence meet. Where love and consequence meet

“Where Love & Consequence Meet” by Paul Nye

© nyesguyTunes Publishing/BMI * paulenye@me.com * 218-507-0081

Thanks to Greg & Kiki Webb and Greg Beck who all coached me on this song.

She was walking, scrolling through the endless noise of her day.
Lost in the glow of her screen, the world just drifted away.
She was restless, overthinking every word he didn't speak.
Shadows chasing her mind, and the nights all felt too weak.

It's a long way home, it's a long way home.
When your heart is full of discontent
And you don't know what he meant,
It's a long way home.

She was crying, tears falling fast like hard summer rain.
Every buzz on her phone just reminded her of the pain.
She was hopeful, breathing deep and letting go at last.
Turning the page on the hurt, leaving everything in the past.

All the words left unspoken,
All the silence cut so deep.
She’s been carrying the weight,
But it's time to set it free.

It's a long way home, it's a long way home.
When your heart is full of discontent
And you don't know what he meant,
It's a long way home. (you don't know what he meant)
It's a long way home. (you don't know what he meant)
It's a long way home. (you don't know what he meant)
It's a long way home.

A song I originally wrote in 2015 that I dug out and reworked a bit. I rearranged to fit a brief calling for "Yacht Rock". Vocal by Lacey Bortvit.

Road Of Someday

[Verse 1]
She’s forty-four years old
Jogs her daily miles
Her friends’ll tease her,
She’ll look at them and smile
She’ll let ‘em eat,
Their snickers and their laughs
Her days of doing nothing,
about her dreams have past

[Pre-chorus]
They’ll say bless her heart
She really thinks she’ll get there someday

[Chorus]
She knows the road of someday
Leads to the town of nowhere
So ya take another road,
Through life

[Verse 2]
Enjoys a back yard swing,
A glass of white zin wine
Her kids are doing great,
She’s got a real good life
She’s thinkin’ lately,
‘bout goin’ back to school
She’s heard folks talkin’,
Is that a real good move?

[Pre-chorus]
They’ll say bless her heart
She really thinks she’ll get there someday

[Chorus]
She knows the road of someday
Leads to the town of nowhere
So ya take another road,
Through life

[Bridge]
Well if your gonna reach up,
Really gonna reach up,
Ya gotta get up on your toes
Imagine you are there,
Leap into the air,
Ya never know how far you’ll go

[Verse 3]
One more exam,
Then graduation day
Ordered up a robe,
Size 8 is on the way
She’ll take that walk,
Toss her cap up to the beam
When it comes down,
She’ll have a brand new dream

[Pre-chorus]
They’ll say bless her heart
She really thinks she’ll get there someday

[Chorus 2X]
She knows the road of someday
Leads to the town of nowhere
So ya take another road,
Through life

Suno-ized cover of a moldie- oldie. Hoping to get back in time from work. Song idea came from a motivational guru's use of "The road of someday leads to a town of nowhere." Is it too metaphorical? Do you get it from the verses?

Verse 1
Spent the night in your chair again
The one that doesn’t match
Anything else in the room
But you just had to have

Now it’s the only place I feel safe
So, I wrap myself in its curves
Cuddle into its arms
And pretend they’re yours

Pre-Chorus
The day I lost you
Is the day my world stopped
Now all I do is stare at a clock

Chorus
Cause everyone keeps promising me
Time is all I need
So, eyes wide open I sit and watch
Every tick and every tock
It strikes midnight, one, and then two
But never strikes me getting over you

Verse 2
I swear I still hear your laugh
Feel your warm breath on my neck
No matter how hard I try
They’re things I just can’t forget

Your clothes still hang next to mine
Your shoes neatly line the floor
Nothing has dimmed your memory
But that’s what I keep waiting for

Chorus
Cause everyone keeps promising me
Time is all I need
So, eyes wide open I sit and watch
Every tick and every tock
It strikes midnight, one, and then two
But never strikes me getting over you

Bridge
You should still be here
Whispering you love me in my ear
But you’ve gone to a better place
And I’m stuck counting down this heartbreak

Chorus
Cause everyone keeps promising me
Time is all I need
So, eyes wide open I sit and watch
Every tick and every tock
It strikes midnight, one, and then two
But never strikes me getting over you

It never strikes me getting over you

There’s another world living on the other side
On the far right of the great divide
Our brothers and our sisters in another time
Are we ever going to get ‘em to cross that line

Can we still live together side by side
Some want to see the worlds collide
Does it need to be a game of all or none
Has the beginning of the end already begun

Most people just want to live their lives
Politics requires compromise
Just because we disagree
Does not make us the enemy

There’s foul wind blowing on the other side
From a would-be king propped up by lies
Who says he hates us and calls us scum
What kind of country have we become

While he attacks democracy
Silence from the GOP
He ignores the constitution
Uses power for retribution

There’s another world living on the other side

©2025 | Greg Beck Music

I watched Neil Young's set at Farm Aid and was inspired to write a political song in his style.

COUNTRY LOST
By Tony Wentersdorf & Paul Nye
VERSE 1:
Women’s rights have been overruled,
MAGA Christian Right is pushing prayer in public schools.
The National Guard patrols cities trying to keep crime at bay,
Mass shootings have become another typical day.

CHORUS:
Has our country lost its soul – Is it hanging by a thread?
Are we falling down a hole – Is real patriotism dead?
Do we even comprehend – what’s truly at stake?
Will all this partisan hate become our final mistake?
Is our country lost?

VERSE 2:
Immigrants and refugees are rounded up en masse,
And sent to concentration camps where thugs and ICE kick ass!
I stop and ask myself: “How much progress have we made?”
Cuz in that big White House, crime & corruption seem to pay

CHORUS/SOLO/CHORUS:
Has our country lost its soul – Is it hanging by a thread?
Are we falling down a hole – Is real patriotism dead?
Do we even comprehend – what’s truly at stake?
Will all this partisan hate become our final mistake?
Is our country lost?

VERSE 3:
Project 2025 has set the stage
For white, privileged immigrants of fathers from a past age
If our founding fathers saw us now, I wonder what they’d say.
Would they give in to despair or find a better way?

CHORUS (2X):
Has our country lost its soul – Is it hanging by a thread?
Are we falling down a hole – Is real patriotism dead?
Do we even comprehend – what’s truly at stake?
Will all this partisan hate become our final mistake?
Is our country lost?

TAG: Are we sleeping through our own wake, Is our country lost? Are we lost?

Co-write with Tony Wentersdorf and Paul Nye. Submitted by Paul. Tony wrote came up with the concept and wrote most of the lyrics. Paul contributed a little, and did all the recording and production. This was a really fun write for both of us and a challenging blast to record,

Which Wolf
Terry Kennedy copyright 2025

There are two wolves, hidden inside,
each on a mission, there they abide,
one brings dark, and the other brings light,
Good and Bad, locked in a fight

Chorus:
Are you woke or are you broke
what kind of person will you be
Are you woke or are you broke
Which wolf will you feed.

So many broken people, wandering the earth,
spending all their money, for all that it’s worth,
living out their nightmares, struggling to be free,
hard working zombies, which wolf do they feed.

Chorus
Bridge:
So many of life’s situations
tend to drag us down,
which wolf will you call on
when troubles come to town

There are two wolves, are you aware,
are you awake, do you care,
Two wolves, when you have need,
which will you call on, which will you feed.

Chorus

I think I'm going to rename this "Two Wolves". I'm still in the process of tweaking this. Any thoughts would be helpful.

ROCKIN’ RITA

Rockin’ Rita, she’s American made,
Has a heart of gold, and never, ever afraid,
Every girl, wants to be just like her,
Pretty and smart, soaring free, like a seabird,
Boy’s dream, she’s their destiny,
Even though it won’t come true, it’s their fantasy.

CHORUS
Hey, Rockin’ Rita, be my dream girl,
Don’t want Anita or Chiquita, Oh Rita,
Dream of me, hear my plea, Rockin’ Rita, Oh Ya!
Dream of me, hear my plea, Rockin’ Rita!

Rockin’ Rita, she’s the fire and the flame,
She’s truly the star, like G.I. Jane, in a war game,
Her laughter’s a sweet soothing sound,
When she enters a room, every head, turns around,
Want to meet Rita, gotta search your mind,
She’s in your head, beautiful, and one of a kind.

CHORUS

BRIDGE
Maybe I’m a fool, for chasing a dream,
Maybe it’s cool, I think the grass is green,
But if we don’t have hopes and dreams,
Call it a day, and pack up your moonbeams!

CHORUS

James M. Fritz AKA Jimmy Fat Fingers Songwriter BMI 012904227866, jfritzws@hotmail.com

This song was 100% written by me including lyrics, melodies, and chord structure. I used Suno AI, similar to a recording studio, to produce the instrumentation and vocals with instructions to strictly cover and follow song demo melodies, lyrics, chord structure, key and tempo. I hope you enjoy!

THE PERFECT SONG
Terry Kennedy-Lares copyright 2025

I sat down on Saturday morning,
trying to write a song about love,
the rain turned to mist now it’s forming
a rainbow in the sky up above

Then words come to mind
how the sun is gonna shine,
and everything is gonna be alright.

Chorus:
I’m gonna write the perfect song
so you can sing along
and feel like I wrote it from the heart.
I’m gonna write the perfect verse,
to feed the Nashville curse,
where money’s more important than the Art.

They promised I could make some money
if I learned about melody and rhyme,
While counting words and spinning metaphors
I forget about my soul all the time.

then the thought comes to mind,
why are you searching for that rhyme,
why are you writing this at all.
Chorus

I gotta write a song each day,
they tell me thats the way,
but all it does is clutter up my mind.
Chorus
Money’s not important, AI makes you impotent,
But nothings more important than the Art.

Sorry, but this is my brother's birthday and I can't be with you. If you want to review this "Perfect Song" I'll catch the replay. If not that's ok too.
This is just a basic mix and still has a lot of polishing to do before it's ready for release. But it brings up the many issues of songwriting that we've been talking about lately, which is what sparked the idea for the song.

WITH JESUS
By Paul Nye

VERSE 1:
His day began like a typical day – a cup of coffee, a kiss and some toast
Headed out the door, his jacket on, cuz the day seemed a little bit cold
Was a hard working man, loved his family & God, who provided all their needs
With the cost of living, just getting by, put his trust in the one he couldn’t see
Had faith in the One he believed

VERSE 2:
He arrived at the job site, helmet in hand, his lunch pail by his side
Rode the lift to the 21st floor, the sun began to rise
Stepped off at the top, he turned & he stopped – caught by surprise
His life flash before him, that instant he’s gone, never got to say “goodbye”
Never got to say “goodbye”

CHORUS:
Now he’s with Jesus – he was a godly man
But his little boy, don’t understand
Why his daddy’s not there, listenin’ to his prayers
Playin’ catch with him everyday
He’s with Jesus, but that boy will find his way

VERSE 3:
She wakes up in the morning to a quiet house and a longing in her heart
Holds the blanket they shared, his presence remains, though her world is torn apart
But she knows that God is always there, even though he seems so far
Still, the pain persists, she clings to hope, through a slow-healing scar
You see, Jesus knows all about scars.

CHORUS:
She knows he’s with Jesus – he was a godly man
But her little boy, don’t understand
Why his daddy’s not there, listenin’ to his prayers
Playin’ catch with him everyday
He’s with Jesus, but that boy will find his way

BRIDGE:
At night she prays with her son, wondering, who will provide
His absence, a haunting reminder – that the heartache’s real inside

CHORUS: They know he’s with Jesus, he was a godly man But they long for, the touch of his hand They know he’s there listenin’ to their prayer In their heart everyday, He’s with Jesus, and they find peace some way He’s with Jesus, and they will find peace some day

“WITH JESUS” By Paul Nye * © nyesguyTunes Publishing/BMI * paulenye@me.com

In Case You Missed It

It's not what it looks like. I know it looks real bad
It's just the way I get things done
It's not what it looks like. I hope you understand
I'm not about to give up and run

In case you missed it
I said I love you
I thought you heard every single word I said
In case you missed it
I said I need you
Or maybe it was all in my head

It's not what it seems like. I'm not that kind of girl
Sometimes I look real confused
It's not what it seems like. I'm never gonna lie
I know these words are overused

In case you missed it
I said I love you
I thought you heard every single word I said
In case you missed it
I said I need you
Or maybe it was all in my head

They say you get what you ask for
I'm not sure if that's true
But if you reach out to me, my love,
I'm always gonna be here for you

In case you missed it
I said I love you
Or maybe it was all in my head
Maybe it was all in my head
Maybe it was all in my head

Wondering if the downtempo style works.

Cruising in my Chevy on a steamy summer night
One hand on the wheel making all the lights
With my best friend Jim and guy named Jack we hardly knew
Who wanted a ride home a simple thing to do

He asked if we could stop at a small convenience store
He was almost out of smokes needed to get more
When he got back in the car he screamed step on the gas
He held a shiny black handgun and a bag full of cash

Chorus:
In the wrong place at the wrong time
Nothing we could foresee
It was not our plan not our crime
We didn’t know we were riding in bad company

There was cold steel pressed against the back of my head
I yelled what the hell is going on as away we sped
Sweat rolled down my face we roared into the unknown
There was fear in Jimmy’s eyes as we heard the sirens drone

We rounded a curve and in the middle of the road
There was a barricade surrounded by the highway patrol
I hit the brakes swerved right flying out of control
The world went spinning around as we started to roll

[Repeat chorus]

Me and Jim were hanging upside down strapped in our seats
Jack flew through the windshield and lay dead on the street
They put us in handcuffs we were under arrest
The cops said we’d better off if we would confess

Bridge:
Starring through the bars disbelief
How can we convince them that we’re not thieves
Facts are on our side will they believe they’re true
Can we make them understand we are victims too

[Repeat chorus]

Verse 1

Love at first sight was something I could never understand

I thought it was a joke made up to give people false hope

But the sparks I felt when you touched my hand

Led to things unplanned


And I fell…



Chorus

Faster than a stubbed toe makes you cry

Faster than an ice cream melts in July

Faster than a politician tells a lie

Faster than a toddler questions why

Just like that, I, I, I fell fast

I fell fast 



Verse 2

PDAs always made me roll my eyes out loud

Now I’m the one showing I’m so in love

My head is stuck up in the highest clouds

From thinking about what I found


When I fell…



Chorus

Faster than a narcissist cuts the line

Faster than a super villain commits a crime

Faster than a poet creates a rhyme

Faster than a flip flopper changes his mind

Just like that, I, I, I fell fast

I fell fast 



Bridge

Twenty-five years and one diamond later

You’re still the one

Who can touch my hand

And make me fall again…



Chorus

Faster than a Mustang hits top speed

Faster than a bad team gives up a lead

Faster than a rich man shows his greed

Faster than a genius aces the SATs

No doubt  that, I, I , I fell fast

I fell fast 


Outro

Faster than a stubbed toe makes you cry

Faster than an ice cream melts in July

Faster than a narcissist cuts the line
Faster than a super villain commits a crime

Faster than a Mustang hits top speed

Faster than a bad team gives up a lead

I, I, I fell fast


I fell fast, I fell fast


I fell

ANNA LEE AND ME

Ninth grade, high school dance, took a chance, found romance, Wa Wahoo!
First kiss, we’re willing, it’s chilling, so thrilling, O’Don-ugh-noe!
Your touch, heart and soul, lose control, make me whole, Ya, Yahoo!
Our love, a Caribbean Isle, sand and sea, you and me, Wa Wahoo!

CHORUS
Anna Lee and Me,
Walking on the sands,
Laughing, holding hands
Anna Lee and Me!
Strolling in the breeze,
Doing as we please,
Anna Lee and Me

Wedding vows, trim our brows, take our bows, wear some blue, who who knew!
Newlywed, life’s ahead, share a bed, break some bread, Bon Bon Voyage!
We’re family, thirty five, ain’t no jive, five in the hive O’ Don-ugh-noe!
Our dream, Caribbean Isle, sand and sea, four plus me, Wa Wahoo!

CHORUS
BRIDGE

Older now, it’s the best, empty nest, stood the test, Wa Wahoo
Life’s complete, come to peace, life’s a lease, we will cease, O Don-ugh-noe!
Dream team, husband and wife, never strife, we’re for life, Oh, Oh Oh!
Forever love, Caribbean Isle, you and me, had to be, Ya Yahoo!

CHORUS

James M. Fritz AKA Jimmy Fat Fingers jfritzws@hotmail.com

I wrote the melody and lyrics to this song in 2021 as a rock song,when I recorded my Song Demo turned into a jazz song with lyrics and the flow of music. I inserted my song demo and lyrics into Suno Ai, with specific instructions to cover this song exactly, lyrics, melody, chord structure key and tempo. Suno Ai used horns instead of guitars because of the jazz style nature of the song, but the melody is extremely close to my 2021 Song Demo. This song is totally outside my wheelhouse and could be sung by Mel Torme', Eddie Fischer or Steve Lawrence type jazz singers.

In the Stillness of the Night May 2025

1. I just can’t wait ‘til the sun goes down. When the
stars wander by/ and the
fire flies arise and shine./ I’ll
wait for you in the stillness of the night.

2. This/ small town park still hasn’t changed/ from a
night much like this./ Back
when we kissed our final kiss/ and
turned away not knowing what comes next.

Chorus:
I/ felt as if the time for change had come./ I
found myself without you./ At
night I’d dream about you,/ wake
up and ask myself what have I done.

3. My spouse is gone and the kids are grown./ I don’t
mind if I’m alone./ That’s a
part of me that I’ve let go./ My
life with you was the best I’ll ever know.

4. I’d give so much just to hear your voice/ and to
hear the things you’d say./ Have you
tell me how your life has changed/ from the
day I left through the years until today.

Chorus:
I/ felt as if the time for change had come./ I
found myself without you./ At
night I’d dream about you,/ wake
up and ask myself what have I done./ Now I

Bridge:
watch for you in the starlight, in the
sparkle of the fireflies/and the
faces of the everyday people on the street.

5. I’ll say good night to the rising sun/ as the
town comes to life/ I’ll
close my eyes one more time/ to
face the past and the one I left behind.

6. This time next year I’ll come back again/ as the
stars wander by/ and the
fire flies arise and shine/ I’ll
wait for you in the stillness of the night.
(repeat melody of pre-chorus)

I just can’t wait ‘til the sun goes down

I came up with a bridge since the last review session. Wanna hear how it fits in with the entire song.